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In The Shadows

With feeble limbs and mind of fleet, I walk down known but lonely streets, Unfamiliar faces wave the time of day, While I shuffle words like toys to play, My eyes hide within every lonely line, Like cracks on pavements unaligned, My soles blistered in rainbows dressed, My heart so aches for love I've missed. Days are longing. the nights are colder, Only shadows to rest upon my shoulder, My entirety starved of lives oxygen, My words triste, limps far beyond.

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Date: 3/28/2024 3:17:00 PM
I felt twinges of sadness, loneliness, and a yearning for true love. You have a wonderful ability to rhyme in a flowing, effortless manner that doesn't distract from your poem and its message. I loved the imagery in these words: 'my soles blistered in rainbows dressed' Exquisite. I felt the heartache so deeply as I read this poem. Outstanding job, Daniel. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/29/2024 12:26:00 AM
Top of the morning to you Sara, I'm in the middle of renovating our old Victorian house, so I have little windows of opportunity to write , my cat Bob wakes me at 04:30 am each morning for food , then it's his playtime , so some mornings I get a couple of hours to write and. Respond, hopefully I will have more time come Autumn. So pleased you liked the poem, Daniel
Date: 3/28/2024 9:06:00 AM
This is a nice emotive poem, Daniel.
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/28/2024 10:55:00 AM
Hello Andrea , thank you once again , for your ,kind words . Daniel

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