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In the Moment

I am in the cliff of death that moment. The very first life I'm about to give birth. You were on my side and held my hands so tight. Assuring that tomorrow I'll see the precious one of my life. I saw in your beautiful face that you feel all my pain. Then teardrops suddenly fall in your eyes, When you hear a little voice cried out loud. The fruit of thy womb of your precious one. You were with me from the day that I born, Then helped me become a successful person. You're also there when I fell and destroyed. You never left when I needed you most. I want to dedicate this little piece. To my only mother here on Earth. In the moment I first saw my angel. You made me stronger until today. Written on: December 28 ,2014 Written by : Aiyah De Torres

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Donna Jones

Date: 3/7/2015 9:00:00 AM

This is wonderful.....congratulations

Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 2/20/2015 11:46:00 PM

Mothers need such beautiful poems, i loved the pictures in them poem Congs

Skat A

Date: 2/19/2015 6:10:00 PM

Aiyah, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win **SKAT**

Eve Roper

Date: 2/19/2015 2:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem. Blessings eve

Jan Allison

Date: 2/19/2015 9:57:00 AM

This was so moving - many congrats AiyaH:-) Hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/19/2015 9:27:00 AM

Hello Once again Aiyah, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "This Very Moment" if you'd like. Wishing you a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA

Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/21/2015 5:32:00 PM

it's always a pleasure to join in your contest ,dear Linda :) and I thank you for considering my poem to be one your winners... more luck to your upcoming contests... ^_^

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2015 10:10:00 AM

I am very moved by your poem, Aiyah. My mother made me who I am from, day one until now. A wonderful and moving dedication. It's been a long while since I've read or stopped by. Nice seeing you.. Linda

Paul Callus

Date: 12/31/2014 1:17:00 PM

Mothers are there when they are most needed. Sometimes we tend to forget that, but they never forget us! Childbirth is such a precious event, and you caught that moment with such warm feelings! May I wish you all the best for the new year Aiyah...especially happiness, good health and love!:) /x/ paul

Tim Smith

Date: 12/29/2014 10:11:00 AM

How beautiful AiyaH my friend...have a happy and blessed new year...hugs Tim

Len Gasun

Date: 12/29/2014 2:27:00 AM

This is a very precious poem and dedication to your great mom my very dear friend Aiyah. Just like your poem, mothers are so precious , 'coz they are always there from our birth up to the time when we also be mothers. I love your poem. Thanks a lot for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for your Christmas greetings and warm wishes! I lovingly Wish you and your loved ones all the best as well! God bless you & your family! Miss you a lot too! love lots and big hugs. I'll b back soon ok. Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/28/2014 5:30:00 AM

- So beautifully written to your mother, dear Aiyah - I wish you luck in the contest and a happy new year 2015 !!! - All the best to you my friend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)