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In Regards To Love

befalling against the darkened skies the last thread of light flickers then fades within the silence forthcoming fathomless are these thoughts stirring about like hair twirled in a caress of winds that leaves me breathless beneath the rhythmic pulse of my own heart racing towards yours so beautiful this love that draws me to you in thoughts of mind on the wings of dreams it soars free like birds over meadows of green yet memories evade then fade in the stillness of time with the remembrance of your death 02/25/2020

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Jenish Somadas

Date: 3/11/2020 3:41:00 AM

You are excellent when dealing with sad themes.. Like a sandwich you squeezed the beautiful memories of love between the lose.. Congrats on your win Sandra..

Sandra Adams
Date: 3/11/2020 6:40:00 PM

Thank you so much Jenish :) hugs

Constance La France

Date: 3/10/2020 6:13:00 PM

Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem and thank you for taking part _Constance

Sandra Adams
Date: 3/11/2020 6:40:00 PM

thank you so much Constance... hugs

Lawrence Strauss

Date: 2/27/2020 7:05:00 PM

Thank you for posting this. I feel the elevation-importance conveyed with "befalling" and "meadows of green". And the stark, painful, plain, abrupt death-like end. (I remember scratching my head at this crazy contest that you made look effortless)

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/27/2020 8:46:00 PM

what a kind thing to say, thank you so much for stopping by to read and leave such a nice comment... does this mean you will try one for the contest? sometimes the ones with some given words can make wonderful inspiration for the muse :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/26/2020 7:29:00 AM

The given words blend beautifully in your charming write, Sandy--another gem from your gifted pen. All the best.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/26/2020 6:49:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 2/26/2020 6:58:00 AM

Beautifully written Sandy. Your words flow seamlessly till the heart braking lines at the end. Maybe I should have said effortlessly, because your poetry always seems so natural. So much beautiful is always woven into your poems. Best wishes in the contest

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/26/2020 6:49:00 PM

Thank you so much Chris, your kind words brought a smile ...my muse couldn't decide on a love or death theme... hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/26/2020 12:44:00 AM

Great use of the allocated words Sandra, you wove your verse around them with ease. Good luck Tom

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/26/2020 5:06:00 AM

Thank you Tom. Not with ease I been attempting this contest for several days ... hugs

John Watt

Date: 2/25/2020 11:51:00 PM

Excellent artistry, Sandra - I do like, "yet memories evade then fade in the stillness of time". You made this challenge look easy, yet with another profound outcome.i expect this will do very well in the contest. Hugs ~ John

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/26/2020 5:05:00 AM

Thank you so much John. I attempted to write for this contest all week but time and a fickle muse made it tough. Hugs