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In October

October first, October last, woe the year that left so fast; eternal night that fills it's spawn with caressing light from not so long. Leaves fall wilted, ashes left, the sidewalk stained with dead carcass... ...debris from not so long, It's an eternal song... ...that lives within us all... ...In October.

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Date: 10/18/2010 3:35:00 PM
a very interesting thought, an excellent write :). thank you for the comments, enjoyed this. --Madison
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Date: 10/1/2010 2:36:00 PM
nice one on october, it did go by fast, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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Date: 10/1/2010 1:31:00 PM
I like it! I really like the dark images of decay that you mingle with the more vague idea of eternity. Great write!
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Date: 10/1/2010 1:29:00 PM
great write Micheal! you have the gift! good write!! flows like smooth milk in hot coffee! good to the last drop!
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Date: 10/1/2010 1:29:00 PM
A nice tribute you have paid welcoming the fall, Michael
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