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A love , I promise you In next life when time will be so gracious, Your love will be so precious ;this heavenly bliss , I promise you ! I promise you my arms around you; my scintillating cinnamon skin melting in you ; my eyes admiring you before the morning spring , yes I promise you ! Nothing is left for today , a beautiful tomorrow I promise you.... I promise to dive in your blue eyes , my clandestine lover ... all I promise you ... Red

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Date: 3/12/2016 9:54:00 AM
So much Love and yearning coming through, it must have been a very lucky guy who was in your mind at the time of writing.
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Date: 8/14/2013 11:01:00 AM
"Scintillating cinnamon skin", awesome! Fantastic declaration of heart here!
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Date: 8/12/2013 9:11:00 PM
It sounds like he will be a lucky man when you keep that promise. A passionate piece.
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Date: 11/29/2012 1:51:00 PM
Well looks like sombodys in for it here, Enjoyed the read.."
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Date: 10/19/2012 12:05:00 PM
Just a smile ----- miss you - - - Have a peaceful weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/13/2012 9:21:00 AM
wonderful write Reds
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Date: 10/13/2012 9:17:00 AM
good work Red fiery , well done
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Date: 8/20/2012 6:36:00 PM
Let us hope there is a next life.You probably know the song from the James Bond Movie - "You only live twice - once for yourself and once for your dreams" This poem of yours is very romantic, Red Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/20/2012 12:07:00 PM
Wow!But why not in this life:)
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Date: 8/20/2012 3:26:00 AM
Hi Red....glad you are back here again, happy to read your pleasant poem, thank you. - Have a beautiful new week. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/20/2012 2:36:00 AM
Red....it is just wonderful to see you here again, love this, particularly the fifth line...I sure hope so......David
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Date: 8/20/2012 2:07:00 AM
Nicely written :)with best wishes,Watisungla :)
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Date: 8/20/2012 2:04:00 AM
So moving, simple and nice!
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