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In My Nights

Some things are there that wakes me as I sleep, They are the dreams of mine aroused in my nights. The day today and those were passed yesterday were timeless, But clusters of their memories fill my mind in my nights. Now the voice of revelation sounds in the thoughts, That surprised me giving an intangible world in my nights. And a day when I sights my heart-crush, A feeling of loneliness appears very inane in my nights. Next day thought which make me humane clicked to me, When I thought I am not considerate in my nights

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Date: 11/3/2011 10:58:00 AM
i forgot to rate your work.
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Date: 11/3/2011 10:56:00 AM
very good work, congo! but there are few mistakes which i want to point out- And a day when I sights{sight} my heart-crush, i think there should be mind rather than nights in l2. l3 is very very thought provoking.
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Amit Valmiki
Date: 11/3/2011 9:11:00 PM
thanks pummy sir,for your comments and view......thanks for making some changes and showing me mistakes for improvement of poem...thank you..
Date: 9/7/2011 7:53:00 PM
nicely done
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