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In Her Eyes

She was full of rage she had been crushed into many peices a broken heart that she thought could not be repaired she wanted to take her life for she felt she had no life the way she lived she had the feeling she was already dead no hope, no joy, no one to care, and no one to love you could see it in her eyes, a river of tears, flames of destruction.. she had a stare of death, she felt that the future had passed her by yesterday will never come and today was a mystery everything she ever feared were in her eyes had she stopped and dried her eyes for a moment and looked a little further concentrated on her vision she would have seen her bright future and that the good life she never lived was also in her eyes

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Date: 6/5/2022 6:41:00 AM
Very true indeed great words deep
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Date: 6/13/2009 10:12:00 AM
Cathy - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/9/2009 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured>James
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Date: 6/9/2009 7:22:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful poem being featured this week. You are such a wonderful poet. Keep your pen dancing to the drum beat of your heart and art. Adeleke
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Date: 6/9/2009 7:21:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful poem being featured this week. You are such a wonderful poet. Keep your pen dancing to the drum beat of your heart and art. Adeleke
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Date: 6/8/2009 2:51:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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Date: 6/8/2009 1:21:00 PM
Congrats Cathy on your lyric "In Her Eyes" being featured. Vince
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Date: 6/8/2009 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Cathy. Love, Carol
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