In a Tipsy Frame of Mind

"in a tipsy frame of mind" my pen point was swirling and twirling to be on a romantic adventure so fun and fancy free with a tipsy turn here and with savoir faire' there escaping to the Poetry Palace swimming for a "pen-mate" mare. lo! and behold! being drunk with emotion my pen jumped a dive in word-infested ocean it rolled and it stretched; back strokes, as it fetched on it's clip, hung by hook, the word "love" was etched. my pen was so excited as another invited in a drunken stupor, would love be unrequited? as the black and gold form grew all toasty and warm came face to face as a SHARPIE did swarm. the moral is simple: when the love bug soon soars beware! of the SHARPIE whose inks bolder than yours! *For Joann Grisetti's Drunken Pen 2 ...

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Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 5/24/2017 12:04:00 PM

Your ink is still bold. Thinking of you today. Spring... bright and pretty, like you were. You are missed xoxoxox

Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 2:57:00 AM

~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/14/2012 9:50:00 AM

I have seen drunken man and never seen drunken pen before but just now seen of yours. It's a matter of acute realization and art of expression, you have done nicely, my friend. Loved always, bl

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/8/2012 3:34:00 PM

This is a simply awesome write my friend, I truly love each exciting line that you have written within this glamorous poem! So are the sharpie and the pen married yet, and if they are, who was invited to their wedding? Just having a little fun as you presented a lot of fun within your write Linda-Marie! This is a wondrous piece, Great Work!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/8/2012 2:43:00 PM

Oh this is so different from you, yet the magic is there just the same as always

Anne Rutherford

Date: 10/8/2012 2:06:00 PM

What a fun poem Linda Marie, It should do well in the contest. I hope all is well with you. Hugs Anne

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/8/2012 10:23:00 AM

having some fun today with this contest poets .. better than getting angry and frustrated over poems unsble to be seen or read to comment on other than blank screens .. hope TPS fixes soon .. luv ..