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In a Perfect World

In a perfect world… Well there is no such thing No such thing as a perfect world The world is a flawed place A place full of more hate More hate and less love Love that is needed Needed to make this domain Domain we live in, less Less unbearable, and more More acceptable to people People who try and try Try only to fail Fail only to quit Quit because its easier Easier because society Society says that it is Is it though? In a perfect world… That That is quite a thought.

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/16/2020 5:03:00 AM

In a perfect world… That That is quite a thought.....wow greatly expressed; well rated writing

Kim Difford

Date: 3/8/2016 2:50:00 PM

Really! good write Anthony, strong! message and your Poet's voice shining out. Welcome! to Poetry Soup. Kim

Ocarina Hellish

Date: 3/8/2016 7:56:00 AM

Very well written. That is quite a thought.

Venita Schindler

Date: 3/8/2016 1:42:00 AM

So true and very well written..Keep up the good work

Steven Gerring

Date: 3/7/2016 12:30:00 PM

So true, makes you think, thanks for sharing Steve

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 3/7/2016 5:48:00 AM

Your poems are full of grace in which love finds the proper nest, and society may find with the help of critical thought the acceptable solutions to be a better one in a better world.Congrat.

Maria Padilla

Date: 3/7/2016 1:34:00 AM

I like your poem because of the thought and the way you expressed it!Also because it full of truth.

Chris Hagy

Date: 3/6/2016 4:34:00 PM

Nice write Anthony... I have a poem with the same word construction... I like what you did with this, good job

Old Buck

Date: 3/6/2016 1:34:00 PM

Anthony: It would appear you are new to The Soup. Welcome. The folks here are helpful, very supportive and generally kind. :o) Keep the works coming. They will be read and enjoyed by many in the months to come. oldbuck

Sello Modiba

Date: 3/6/2016 12:05:00 PM

There's no longer a thing called love in this world, what I declare as enough, hates, jealous and so forth. Thanks for the poem Anthony

Susan Walker

Date: 3/6/2016 8:49:00 AM

This is good. Brings the reader along for the story. Makes me like the writer!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/6/2016 7:35:00 AM

Well expressed! I like your take on the contest theme.

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 3/6/2016 6:36:00 AM

Hello Anthony, Very true poem. We have kicked God out of our lives and substituted whatever is true for us is right and this is the result. Oliver

Red Fiery

Date: 3/5/2016 10:22:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your words ....great write indeed ! 7/7

Ricky Kendall

Date: 3/5/2016 8:32:00 PM

Enjoyed it very much. I'm new to this world of verse and I've never read anything like it. Emotional and visual.

Ricky Kendall

Date: 3/5/2016 8:30:00 PM

Enjoyed it very much. I'm new to this world of verse and I've never read anything like it. Emotional and visual.

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 3/3/2016 6:38:00 PM

I admire your construct, repeating words and letting the whole thing flow so wonderfully. Welcome to soup's garden where you will be thrilled.