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In a Perfect World

In a perfect world The children would be singing Man would put down his weapon And dance joyfully Indians would hunt again And he would kiss me once more
2/9/16

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Date: 3/2/2016 8:23:00 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/2/2016 10:41:00 AM
Thank you my dear...Glad to hear from you. Glad you liked it and gave it a 7..the judge gave it a 0......haha Barbara
Date: 2/12/2016 10:05:00 AM
A perfect piece:}
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