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In a Bottle

to dream drift away in a bottle to journey where I want to play so empty to be In a bottle then I see you in there with me

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Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2014 12:44:00 PM

wonderful rhyming haikus that take the reader on a lovely journey:-) Hugs Jan xx

Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/21/2014 3:32:00 AM

awe thanks what a nice compliment

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/20/2014 8:08:00 AM

Nice rhyming in haiku, Cynthia

Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/21/2014 3:32:00 AM

thank you dr Ram

Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/20/2014 8:09:00 AM

thank you Maurice, it was a gift given me I like to return and grow

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/20/2014 7:09:00 AM

A great read. Very strong delivery, a great write.

Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/21/2014 3:34:00 AM

thank you Maurice, sorry my last reply ended up in wrong box

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 9/20/2014 6:49:00 AM

Very rich haiku. Use of "bottle" has heightened the intensity of the poems as it symbolizes life--contents in and out on its way to the unknown. Hugs!

Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/20/2014 8:08:00 AM

this is my challenge

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/20/2014 5:57:00 AM

What a lovely place to be when you are with the one you wish to be! Beautifully expressed, dear Cynthia!

Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/20/2014 6:05:00 AM

thank you, how fun it is to make a small empty space filled with imagination,