Get Your Premium Membership

In a Bottle

Unwind after work Stress just seems to melt away Fun in a bottle Drinks lead to more drinks Alcohol consumed my life Hide in a bottle Nothing to live for The years pass by in a blur Time in a bottle Looking at myself Reflection of a lost soul Stare in a bottle After I climbed out Life exists anew,for death Lives in a bottle Haiku-In a Bottle Contest/Poet Destroyer A 7/22/2014 Greg Hoffman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/21/2014 5:14:00 AM
Wonderful one. congrats on the win
Login to Reply
Date: 8/20/2014 10:12:00 PM
A journey looking thru a glass darkly... Congrats on your win!!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/20/2014 3:15:00 PM
going through all those phases. Nicely done. Congrats for your win.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/20/2014 9:37:00 AM
Hi Greg, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~
Login to Reply
Date: 7/26/2014 2:49:00 PM
Strongly written about what alcohol an lead to. I am sure it will do well in the contest!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/24/2014 12:07:00 AM
a powerful poem against drinking, Greg. Hope you do well in the contest. Sure to be on the winner list!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/22/2014 2:14:00 PM
The circular reasoning of the old conundrum "How do you get the goose out of the bottle." good luck in the contest
Login to Reply
Date: 7/22/2014 9:35:00 AM
great haikus good luck on the contest. hugs jan x
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things