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In Desert

IN DESERT Sizzling Sun hitting hot hammer. Me wandering weary in dry desert. Fiery flame chokes, thirsty throat. Sensing strong simoom in void vastness. Sand specks swirl, drifting dust. Rowdy raven doesn't dare to fly. Camel carries me : Burnt, blurred sky ! 05/07/23 Lines Syllables 1. 8 2. 10. 3. 7 4. 9 5. 6 6. 8 7. 8 Alliterisen contest Second Place By Joseph May.

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Date: 5/30/2023 1:00:00 PM
very well done, Anisha. Congrats to you
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Date: 5/29/2023 9:39:00 AM
I enjoyed your desert poem Anisha, Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/7/2023 3:40:00 AM
...wowza....interesting....desert camels may have poor eyesight........stan
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