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Impulses

Spur of the moment decisions... lifetime of regrets
August 14, 2018 MagiCicada 13 The Heart Of The Matter Contest By Maureen McGreavy Second Place

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Date: 8/20/2018 8:02:00 AM
So true, salutations on your placement for this well worked brevity.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/20/2018 7:34:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/19/2018 12:22:00 PM
Congratulations Susan... brilliant wording! :)x
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/20/2018 7:34:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 8/19/2018 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Susan, excellent verse with so much truth, well written my friend. :))
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/20/2018 7:33:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 8/19/2018 2:20:00 AM
wow - strong image and statement - great winner
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/19/2018 5:13:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 8/18/2018 5:40:00 PM
I think my parents made one of them. Back with congratulations Susan. Blessings, Sian.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/19/2018 5:11:00 AM
Oh my. I get the spur of the moment but not the lifetime regret... Blessings to you too. Thank you. You are so kind!
Date: 8/18/2018 5:34:00 PM
The power of choices!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/19/2018 5:06:00 AM
Yes, that they are.
Date: 8/18/2018 5:26:00 PM
Wow - heavy message. Congrats on your well deserved win, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/19/2018 5:05:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 8/16/2018 6:37:00 AM
Huge story is coming forth from this short art. People do take such uncanny actions. Best of luck for your life Susan. Love this...
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/16/2018 9:59:00 AM
Thank you! I appreciate you reading and commenting.
Date: 8/15/2018 5:32:00 AM
some people are prone to acting impulsively all to often, They are the ones that have the most regrets, Its nice to own a balance. I loved your poem Susan, have a great day, Hugs
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/15/2018 9:00:00 PM
Yes, balance is what it is all about. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 8/15/2018 2:00:00 AM
Love this one! Terrrificc!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/15/2018 8:59:00 PM
Thank you, Tim! Appreciate you.
Date: 8/14/2018 10:19:00 AM
That definitely happens at times. Hopefully not all turn out that way, perhaps some come out as wonderful memories. :) Nicely done
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/14/2018 6:55:00 PM
Oh yes, they have for me. Mostly like playing Russian roulette without being aware I am. :)
Date: 8/14/2018 7:25:00 AM
it always seems like 'the bigger picture'
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/14/2018 6:53:00 PM
Yes. Sometimes that's the hardest to see. Thank you for reading and commenting. :)
Date: 8/14/2018 4:09:00 AM
So true, nice one, good luck in the contest!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 8/14/2018 6:51:00 PM
Thanks.

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