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Immortality

Immortality By forge and hammer comes execution – death on an anvil’s cold steel. To be granted new life. 10/11/16 Written for Contest: ONE KIMO 10,7,6, Syllable Count ONE ONLY Hosted by: Rick Parise

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Casarah Nance

Date: 10/18/2016 5:09:00 PM

Oh well done, I like the hardness of this leading into the mold of newness. grats

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

Date: 10/17/2016 12:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement - I agree with Andrea, very deep write and well executed. Mark

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2016 7:27:00 PM

wow, that is a deep one. WELL DONE and congrats for the win.

Lu Loo

Date: 10/16/2016 2:15:00 PM

lovely imagery and very deep, love it... Congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Paul Callus

Date: 10/16/2016 2:04:00 PM

Ah! I love the creativity and poetic deliverance of this Kimo, Graham! Congratulations on your fine win. // paul

Rick Parise

Date: 10/16/2016 1:55:00 PM

I like the imagery!!!! Very Good- Congrats to you.....

Anu Nayak

Date: 10/16/2016 1:54:00 PM

Hearty congrats on your great win dear The Grahamburglar , lovely description of metallurgy of making new alloy, structure etc.., nicely penned kimo, enjoyed it!//love, Anu:)