I'M Tired

the entry below is dedicated to anyone living with a heavy heart "I'm tired" I'm tired but its ok with stressful obstacles the well still runs the sun still shines I've been held captive pinned to emotional walls betrayed repeatedly over time frozen by life and living souls despite miles to go despite miles to grow captivity is unleashed beyond the far and wide with a beating heart I breathe by grace of God and his love by grace of music and its healing I'm tired but its ok SkyWatcher 04-13-23

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2023 10:06:00 AM

So positive. I am not tired but just fed up!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/17/2023 3:19:00 AM

Good Morning Andrea. You have me smiling. Thank you for that. Yes, fed up is an appropriate and correct word (smile). Thank you for seeing and responding to this entry. Have a great morning and day and may it be good for one and all. Blessings always (smiile)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 4/15/2023 5:17:00 AM

Lovely penning Lisa , nice and encouraging for those carrying heavy loads that need spurred on. Have a blessed weekend, Gordon x

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/17/2023 3:12:00 AM

Good Morning Gordon. Hi. I'm sorry for this late response. Thank you for your gracious and generous review to which enhances the entry itself. Yes, many are walking around with heavy hearts and burdens. Have a wonderful day. a Keep enjoying poetrysoup. Blessings always (smile)

Bill Baker

Date: 4/14/2023 3:15:00 PM

Your poem is uplifting to those with heavy burdens to carry Lisa. Thank you for the positive attitude in your poetry, it will be a help to many. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/17/2023 3:04:00 AM

Top of the Morning to you Bill. Thank you for sharing your intake and wonderful comments. I'm sorry for the delay in responding. Your commentary is most generous Bill to which I do not take for granted. May today be a great day for you and one and all. Keep enjoying poetrysoup. Blessings always (smile)

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/13/2023 8:59:00 AM

Time is change. A very uplifting poem, Lisa.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/14/2023 3:28:00 AM

Hi Daniel. Good Morning. Thank you as always. This is just a small dedication for those walking around with heavy hearts and burdens. Have a wonderful morning and weekend too. Keep enjoying poetrysoup. (smile) Blessings always

Jenna Logan

Date: 4/13/2023 8:53:00 AM

Take heart, Lisa. He asks to carry our burdens and when we do, He lifts them from our weary shoulders.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/14/2023 3:27:00 AM

Good Morning Jenna. Hi. Thank you very much. Words do not express my appreciation for such a gracious and generous review that enhances the entry itself. Yes, many are walking around with heavy hearts and burdens thus this is my small dedication. Have a wonderful morning and day. I look forward to turning to your page as well. Keep enjoying poetrysoup. (smile)