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I'M the Summer That You Love

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I’m Summer, God-blest wondrous season* ordained in your calendar for wellness reason… maximize my offered rejuvenation lesson freeing you from boredom-prison toward revitalizing your person. Refreshing your spirit with revival grip have invigorating nature trip through mountain trek’s ascending strip enjoying faith adventure zip thanking the Lord for wondrous creation-dip. Immerse your body into water plunge delight cooling down through swimming’s zesty might to vanquish scorching rays’ blight… then bask under the shade for relaxation flight freeing mind from burdensome plight. Midst my vacation-packed blissful pleasure Strengthen your fellowships of love-ties measure with family and friends beyond earthly treasure inspired for reaching-out tasks despite pressure toward heavenly pursuits’ seizure.
*Ecclesiastes 3:1 To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose under the heaven. Summer in our country is from March to May. (Personification with rhyme) June 26, 2020 1st place, "Summer Love" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke; judged on 7/4/2020.

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Date: 7/7/2020 8:09:00 AM
Blissful muse of summer delight Beata! Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
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Date: 7/5/2020 8:26:00 AM
A delightful expression of summertime Beata. Congratulations on your wonderful First Place win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/5/2020 12:03:00 AM
I like the spirit-refreshing aspect of this, Beata. Well done, a joy to read. Congratulations on your wonderful win ~ John
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Date: 7/4/2020 3:56:00 PM
Congrats on your top win!;)
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Date: 7/4/2020 1:36:00 PM
Beauty-filled mindful rendering, pleasantly well-said, Beata, my compliments indeed for your 1st Place, win, blessings -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 6/27/2020 5:52:00 AM
I can feel the energy in his one...a positive wave of words... Well done
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