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I'M Missing You

It's so true Without my girl I'm blue, I don't know what to do Sometimes it all starts to go hazy I wonder if I'm going crazy From missing you Girl, I'm missing you I feel so cold, so dark and lost In the night I turn and toss I wonder, are you turning to Maybe it's wrong to feel this way To think I'll die if I don't hear you say Boy, I'm missing you See, I was longing all of my days For a girl who puts me in a daze Longed for a lover.. my best friend A romantic journey that has no end Yeah.. You came to me like a dream come true And I never felt so alive A gift from Heaven to have a girl like you Without your love I can't survive Your so fine Like a red delicious wine, better and better over time Your sweet taste.. Still on my lips Crazy from being away on all these trips I'm missing you Girl, I'm missing you I'm missing you ~Lyric Man Note: This is a song I wrote in a lonely hotel room to my wife. She is my absolute.. my everything! The pain of being on the road and around others who love what I do, when she can't be there with me.. it hurts my heart so much. Sometimes I wonder if she or anyone else misses the person they love that much!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/16/2018 6:45:00 PM
Lovely poem..I remember this.
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Date: 7/8/2018 4:58:00 AM
Lovely lyrics
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Date: 6/24/2018 12:40:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem this is, truly from the heart and believe me that your words have touch my heart,good luck and have a nice day
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Date: 6/23/2018 6:22:00 PM
So lovely. And especially poignant to know its written to your wife. It is a blessing to know some feel like this. Love always - V
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Date: 6/22/2018 4:07:00 PM
Lyric Man, A great song -- full of romance, longing, and sadness. Your last stanza and final verse are the perfect ending. Excellent!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 6/22/2018 12:23:00 AM
I can imagine a singer performing this sad song.well done
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Date: 6/14/2018 8:24:00 PM
I can feel the sadness nice writing
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Date: 6/9/2018 7:27:00 AM
Hello, Chance, very loving and lovely verse. Seemingly gifted toward the lyrical side....Great works...thanks for dropping by my site. This one a Fav for me. I'm a new follower.... Be bless, there's praise in words and words in praise James
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Date: 6/8/2018 11:57:00 PM
Very romantic and moving, Chance! Janice
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Date: 6/8/2018 11:56:00 PM
Very romantic and moving, Chance! Janice
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:43:00 PM
A songwriter indeed...I like what you're doing...All the best Chance
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Date: 6/8/2018 1:52:00 PM
right on the beat and as languid as it gets, chance... my kind of melody!..huggs
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Date: 6/8/2018 12:28:00 PM
Lovely, again feel sadness.
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Date: 6/8/2018 8:03:00 AM
Very well expressed. A nice song for the piano :)
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Date: 6/8/2018 6:32:00 AM
Romantic, indeed. Very lyrical and sweet. Thanks for your visit to my poem.
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Date: 6/8/2018 5:40:00 AM
beautiful read, i can almost feel your pain, hugs keep on writing you have been given a talent xx
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Date: 6/8/2018 5:40:00 AM
A lovely lyrical poetic verse... you're in tune my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 6/8/2018 3:21:00 AM
What a heartfelt lyric, you should get this published Chance, a #1 in my eyes:-) hugs Jan xx
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