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Illuminations

of

Wonder

and

Warmth

from the sky’s black velvet cloak points of light emanate drawing the wonder of all who see but are these sequin stars or tears in the fabric of heaven from which our lost loved ones look down smiling to let us know they are happy one special star reveals a most welcome sight – the face of my husband after all these years, John remains ever loving ever watching over me view the night sky are we seeing distant, fiery orbs of light or do our hearts see something else fear of the afterlife is replaced by warmth a desire to be among illuminated faces… those whose journeys have ended Written March 21, 2020

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Date: 11/19/2020 7:18:00 AM
Quite lovely and evocative--and true, thee personality is immortal, and love never ceases...a beautiful testament to your love
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Date: 9/10/2020 6:38:00 AM
Awesomely beautiful in every way...and so deserving of the winning trophy. ~ Elaine
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Date: 8/14/2020 10:34:00 AM
WOW!!! How did I miss this wonderful/heavenly write???? Love the poem and picture. Congratulation on your wonderful win. Enjoy your day writing away...............
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Date: 8/13/2020 12:11:00 PM
this really is sooo good, hon - so glad to see it was a winner in a contest
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Date: 8/8/2020 4:14:00 PM
wow, Carolyn. this is SO good. I can't believe I ever missed it. And I see it got a trophy too!! Congrats. A fave for me. We cannot fear death. It will only bring us to the light of those we lost.
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Date: 6/24/2020 2:45:00 AM
A brilliant poem that shines in its light and hope, congratulations on your win, Carolyn:)
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Date: 6/15/2020 1:41:00 PM
So beautiful, so hopeful.
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Date: 6/7/2020 7:17:00 AM
Wow, this is so beautiful and hopeful. I can see why it was chosen. A belated congratulations.
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Date: 5/30/2020 3:12:00 PM
I can't believe I missed reading this beautiful poem, Carolyn..it is indeed inspired and illuminating! Death of our loved ones can leave such a big void in our life, but there is the consolation that one day we'll be reunited ina better place. This certainly deserves to go to my favs. Congratulations on your glittering trophy award! Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/18/2020 1:55:00 PM
Hello Carolyn Devonahire, wow! A super great poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 5/13/2020 8:04:00 AM
2 Corinthians 12:4 i believe i pray for your believe sweet dreams to you...much love, james
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Date: 5/4/2020 5:10:00 PM
Wow Carolyn, this poem is incredibly beautiful! I am putting it into my Faves! I can see why it won a trophy. Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 4/13/2020 7:21:00 AM
This poem left me breathless! Wonderfully woven. I love this treasure.
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Date: 4/9/2020 3:59:00 PM
Carolyn, the beauty of your poem moves me in a wonderfully emotional way. Your magical and thought-provoking imagery is spectacular to one's imagination, but especially to one's heart. An enchanting masterwork, truly. Congratulations on your well-deserved trophy win, dear poetess. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/8/2020 9:54:00 PM
Beautiful, love "but are these sequin stars or tears in the fabric of heaven from which our lost loved ones look down smiling to let us know they are happy".
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Date: 4/4/2020 9:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this starlit write that's lit up my night, Carolyn Cheers and Good Cheer, Gershon
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Date: 4/2/2020 12:09:00 AM
Looking to the stars above and within ~ such a touching poem filled with love. Congratulations on your well deserved trophy win!
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Date: 4/1/2020 1:53:00 PM
so glad to see this beautiful poem was a winner - love it x
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/2/2020 12:50:00 PM
Thanks for reading.
Date: 4/1/2020 11:56:00 AM
The stars lift our eyes upward and give us comfort in the absence of our loved ones. The knowledge that they looked upon those same stars brings a smile. Your husband's enduring love is well represented here, Carolyn. I enjoyed this touching poem very much, and wish you congratulations on the well-deserved #1 placement ~ John
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/2/2020 12:51:00 PM
Thank you, John. I always think of my husband when I look up at the stars.
Date: 4/1/2020 11:55:00 AM
The stars lift our eyes upward and give us comfort in the absence of our loved ones. The knowledge that they looked upon those same stars brings a smile. Your husband's enduring love is well represented here, Carolyn. I enjoyed this touching poem very much, and wish you congratulations on the well-deserved #1 placement ~ John
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Date: 3/29/2020 8:27:00 AM
Beautifully written poem. A pure joy to read the heart felt sentiment. Thank you for sharing. JC Hawkens
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Date: 3/28/2020 12:52:00 PM
Carolyn, The beliefs we hold.,often all we have to replace the hands we used to. Wonder and warmth in your stars so vividly told. I too choose to believe. -Richard
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Date: 3/27/2020 1:21:00 AM
This Corona Virus has made us think of death as a journey to loved ones who are waiting for us, but i don't feel ready to go yet - however that will be God's choice. Congratulations my dear friend for a breathtaking poem and the trophy won. Love and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/23/2020 5:02:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, perfection, painted by such wonderful words gentle grace. This piece is such a joy to read. It does surely bring peace to the soul. You paint such a Heavenly vision on the canvas of the mind. Your poem is such a pleasure to read. A definite Fav. Stay safe, Carolyn. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 3/23/2020 3:14:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this piece in your awesome poetic style with these picturesque words:" but are these sequin stars or tears in the fabric of heaven..." God bless you.
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