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Inspired by the verse, Ephesians 5:7-14:

Therefore do not be partakers with them; for you were formerly darkness, but now you are Light in the Lord; walk as children of Light (for the fruit of the Light consists in all goodness and righteousness and truth).trying to learn what is pleasing to the Lord. Do not participate in the unfruitful deeds of darkness, but instead even expose them; for it is disgraceful even to speak of the things which are done by them in secret. But all things become visible when they are exposed by the light, for everything that becomes visible is light. For this reason it says, "Awake, sleeper, And arise from the dead, And Christ will shine on you."

I L L U M I N A T I O N When darkness eats the space I in the nucleus of rippling cochlea braces head-tight the world. Glow clears, God called my name... ___________________________________________ ***#1 connection with the Supreme source --Contest Name: MYSTIQUE Sponsor: Nette Onclaud ~~3rd Place~~ O.E. Guillermo 2:30 pm , July 09, 2015

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Abhishek Rathore

Date: 8/6/2015 4:14:00 PM

Awesome Poem,..:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2015 11:59:00 PM

Awesome pen Olive! Superb write n great win ! Big congrats!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 10:55:00 AM

thanks much Dr. Upma.. :)!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/25/2015 5:23:00 PM

A divine message you received in this lovely expression of your connection. Olive. Big congrats!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 10:54:00 AM

thank you COnnie.. I appreciate your lovely comment.. =') all for His glory!!!

Lee Carter

Date: 7/25/2015 5:12:00 PM

Beautiful connection olive congrats on your win! ~ lee

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 10:52:00 AM

Thanks much Lee.. :)!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2015 5:03:00 PM

a wonderful take on the theme Olive many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 10:50:00 AM

thanks much JAn. =')

Skat A

Date: 7/25/2015 3:14:00 PM

this is a wonderful win. SK

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 10:48:00 AM

thank you SKat.. :)!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2015 10:59:00 AM

Your approach to theme is marvelous! Congrats on the win, Olive.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 10:47:00 AM

thanks much Andie.. :D!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/25/2015 10:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, wonderful write. Hugs Eve

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 10:46:00 AM

Thank you so much Eve.. =')!

Aiyah Torres

Date: 7/25/2015 9:58:00 AM

Hey dear Eloi, your purest devotion to our dear God lifted you high!! Incomparable talent...I congratulate you !! :O))

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/27/2015 9:33:00 AM

thank you so much AIyah.. Ikaw din kaya galing galinf!! :D!~Olive Eloisa

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/16/2015 2:13:00 PM

Within the dark positive energy's rippling senses passes the light to the head and tight the whole body in mother's womb and after that one is born and God calls his or her name. An outstanding poem on Universal topic done exceptionally my lovely beautiful friend. Wish you good luck. 7+++ i feel. Loved always,bl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/18/2015 8:38:00 AM

BL you nailed what I want to deliver!!love it.. thanks~Olive Eloisa

Milton Robertson

Date: 7/14/2015 7:20:00 AM

Interesting, So that's what is going on. You have turned a light on Olive Eloisa. Thank you GOD BLESS.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/15/2015 12:48:00 AM

Thank much Milton.. glad of your comment

Paul Callus

Date: 7/12/2015 9:44:00 AM

Lovely and illuminating, Olive_eloi! The sound waves of a rippling cochlea echoes His calling! hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/19/2015 1:07:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim,,, your comment always is a booster! :D!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/15/2015 12:46:00 AM

rippling cochlea are the first words that came when i sae the pic and see the theme

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/10/2015 3:14:00 PM

Hello Olive Eloisa!! A perfect free verse write here. Good Luck in the contest. I think you have the winner poem here -- or at least I think so. A "7" for sure!! Best Wishes Always, Gary

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/14/2015 11:01:00 AM

Gary thank you so much for dropping by and leaving a positive comment.. =')

Len Gasun

Date: 7/10/2015 8:33:00 AM

I love this my dear amiga Olive. I'm sure it will do well in the contest. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for stopping by on my Mehndi poem. God bless! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2015 8:40:00 AM

Thank you so much Amiga Leonora..=") God bless too.. =")

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2015 4:03:00 PM

Hey, you came up with a great way to do this contest, Olive. That is some great illumination!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/11/2015 6:53:00 AM

Andie thank you so much!!! I was caught by the picture.. =") and maybe coincidence that I was reading and thinking of the verse when I am writing it.. =")

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/9/2015 2:04:00 PM

.... wooow .... luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/11/2015 6:51:00 AM

thank you so much Anne Lise.. hugs! =")

James Fraser

Date: 7/9/2015 1:44:00 PM

Closing my eyes reading your poem it's if I'm walking past the gates and entering heaven. Love this little Olive Eloisa. Good luck in the contest, hugs//always//James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2015 10:51:00 AM

Thanks much James ... hugs!!~Olive eloisa

Grace Mutindi

Date: 7/9/2015 4:09:00 AM

Hi Eloisa, all the best in the contest!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/10/2015 3:45:00 AM

thank you so much Grace.. =")!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/9/2015 1:48:00 AM

This is lovely Olive. I hope to see it high on the winner's list!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/9/2015 9:03:00 AM

Connie, thank you so much for dropping by, I just give the form a try.. =") and I remember the verse above so this came. ~