Illness

i do not feel happy i am too sick sadly 1/29/2020 Plus 1 Blog post Brian Strand Note:This form,which I have labelled 'plus1' in the verse section starts with one letter,increasing each by one line with just one letter,ie 1:2:3:4:5: etc.With an integral title.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/1/2020 8:33:00 PM

Cool form / format! And trusting that the 'sickly' part is purely fictional. Cheers, Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/1/2020 8:41:00 PM

Ha it was Brian Strand's form for a blog contest and not an easy form...I am sick and it did inspire the write. So unfortunately not fiction this time :( hugs

Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/1/2020 5:41:00 AM

New form..nice inventiveness..

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/1/2020 5:45:00 AM

Thanks Jenish. It’s Brian Strand”s form. It’s one of his blog contests ... I wanted to try it and found it was very challenging :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2020 1:49:00 PM

- Get well, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/31/2020 6:27:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne Lise :) hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/30/2020 10:48:00 AM

“One” derfully done, Sandra! Lovely verse!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/30/2020 7:07:00 PM

Thank you Kim decided to tackle a couple of Brian’s blog Forms

Running Wolves

Date: 1/30/2020 10:01:00 AM

bummer, but awesomely done...

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/30/2020 7:07:00 PM

Thanks. I had a flu shot.:. Not sure what it is but it sure feels like the flu

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/30/2020 8:12:00 AM

Skillfully done--evocative, as always, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/30/2020 7:08:00 PM

Thank you Vijay :) hugs

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 1/30/2020 7:52:00 AM

Hugs from India!! May poetry make you feel better!!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/30/2020 7:09:00 PM

Aww thank you So much Swetha :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 1/30/2020 6:59:00 AM

Nice form, sad poem. If true, I hope you feel better soon and your smile returns signaling your happiness has as well. Best wishes in the contest Sandy

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/30/2020 7:09:00 PM

Thanks Chris. True but not sure what it is yet :(

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/30/2020 4:55:00 AM

Maybe your body suffers dear, Sandra but your soul is healthy and strong! Hugs xxx.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/30/2020 7:10:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios:) hugs

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/29/2020 10:18:00 PM

Sadly relatable.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/30/2020 7:11:00 PM

Thanks Juliet. Hugs