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Illiterate

I feel that I am illiterate At times I can’t get my words to fit Am I stupid A lost eyelid Tired, I don’t think my mind can make it Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/27/2017 2:03:00 AM
- Let your mind rest ... you have too much to think about - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/26/2017 2:21:00 PM
Time to rest and let the mind take over in your sleep..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Date: 9/25/2017 8:16:00 PM
Funny, Russell. I loved how you rhymed those first two lines.
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Date: 9/25/2017 10:05:00 AM
Join the club, my friend, lol...if you only knew my story...uhh boy lol...great piece Russell...stay well my friend...^WW^
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Date: 9/25/2017 9:14:00 AM
A potent little pen, like Heidi said. Write on dear poet xomo!
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Date: 9/25/2017 9:02:00 AM
I know that feeling from having concussions before. Well done Russell ! :)
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Date: 9/25/2017 7:23:00 AM
PROUD!!! You betcha! You are becoming a convert!!!
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Date: 9/25/2017 7:10:00 AM
A glimpse of blank enters all lives--you have captured such a moment well!
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Date: 9/25/2017 6:44:00 AM
I can relate lol:-) hugs jan xx
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