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Ill Wind

a bleak wind whispers its elegy stirs sorrow waving willows weep... 05/13/2020

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/7/2020 7:55:00 PM

Stirring imagery! Panagiota xxx

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/9/2020 5:36:00 AM

Thank you Panagiota...

Jan Allison

Date: 9/5/2020 10:46:00 AM

the imagery is superb love that final line too Charlie:-) hugs jan xx

Charlie Smith
Date: 9/6/2020 9:07:00 AM

Thanks Jan...

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/6/2020 7:54:00 AM

Hello Charles Smith, I can see the wind blowing the Willow tree and watch it weep. Enjoyed this poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/14/2020 3:22:00 PM

Thank you Darlene...

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/30/2020 8:15:00 AM

Well written and powerful Charlie. I hope you are well :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 7/5/2020 11:58:00 AM

Thanks Heidi, all is well...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/5/2020 5:54:00 AM

Oh...wow. The imagery in this poem is superb. I love the last line!

Charlie Smith
Date: 6/7/2020 12:10:00 PM

Thanks Eileen...

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/4/2020 1:02:00 PM

Hrllo Charles Smith, love this image. Enjoy your day my friend.

Charlie Smith
Date: 6/7/2020 12:10:00 PM

Thank you Marleen...

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/1/2020 5:40:00 PM

Nice imagery of a crying willow

Charlie Smith
Date: 6/2/2020 1:14:00 PM

Thank you Arturo...

Paul Callus

Date: 5/20/2020 5:17:00 PM

An alliterated poem with a vivid image and a dash of personification, Charlie. A thumbs up for you:) Regards // paul

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/23/2020 12:23:00 PM

Thank you Paul...

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/16/2020 2:02:00 PM

I like this one. Especially " it's elegy stirs sorrows. Well done, Charlie Panagiota xoxo

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/17/2020 11:24:00 AM

Thank you Panagiota...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/15/2020 3:27:00 PM

A very beautiful haiku Charlie. It contains that aha moment brilliantly! Blessings xxoo

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/17/2020 11:24:00 AM

Thank You Connie...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/14/2020 4:08:00 AM

Love the image Charlie. Tom

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/14/2020 3:26:00 PM

Thank you Tom...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/13/2020 4:18:00 PM

Bleak wind and waving willow deliver your message brilliantly, Charlie. Indeed they stir sorrow. Well done!

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/14/2020 3:26:00 PM

Thank you Vijay...

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/13/2020 1:35:00 PM

Beautiful evocative haiku Charlie, enjoyed! xomo

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/13/2020 2:34:00 PM

Pigeon please, we're on a first name basis ;),

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/13/2020 1:46:00 PM

Thanks Tart...