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Written - 15th May 2024

If only you knew how I admire you For your loving heart, what you say and do A fine example of humanity Exceptional sentimentality. Because of you the world’s a nicer place With the splendour of your astounding grace Magnificence from your poetic pen Is a joy to read again and again. You found a glorious love, pure and true That teaches the world to love as you do You shower glitter o’er the darkest days Happiness and joy from your heart always. You may perceive you are the precious star Who shines upon earth wherever you are Continue writing, smiling, singing too The world will smile and sing a song with you. If only you Knew.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/19/2024 12:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lonely write with a pretty red rose picture. Enjoy your day, enjoy your win..................

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/19/2024 2:46:00 PM

Thank you Paula, I will enjoy the thrill of the win. Have a lovely evening… Beryl

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/19/2024 11:42:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your win! xhugsx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/19/2024 2:45:00 PM

Thank you Anaya… Hugs, Beryl xx

Hiba Junaid

Date: 5/19/2024 11:31:00 AM

pretty, pretty, pretty. my heart clenched.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/19/2024 2:35:00 PM

Thank you Hiba, who could ask for anything more… Beryl

Silent One

Date: 5/19/2024 11:11:00 AM

Lovely rhyme and flow as always.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/19/2024 2:33:00 PM

Thank you Silent One, I’m delighted with my placement and enjoyed the challenge of your contest… Beryl

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/18/2024 8:18:00 AM

Poetry has a profound impact on the world and even more so upon individuals, whether it underlines, kindness, political sanity, courage and most certainly love, it is paramount that it exists. Your poem is a true indication of this, a beautiful write, Good luck in the contest, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/19/2024 2:32:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer, poets and poetry do nestle in our hearts for many different reasons. There’s so many inspiring poets on PoetrySoup, everyone is a treasure. Blessings and hugs in return… Beryl

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/17/2024 2:07:00 PM

Outstanding, what a lucky special someone, poet, to make you feel this way, Beryl. There are no greater gifts than the gift of a warm-hearted poem full of soul & love & kind words that rhyme and flow as beautifully as your entry. Best If You Only Knew I've read!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/19/2024 2:21:00 PM

Thank you so much Anaya, it was a pleasure to write this for our poetic treasure who is a joy to the world. I so appreciate your kind words, truly I do. Blessings, Beryl

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/16/2024 9:56:00 PM

A fine tribute to your lover. A delicious poem which I love. Best for a win.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/17/2024 12:23:00 AM

Thank you Victor, though this is not about the one I love, it’s someone whose personality I admire. Beryl

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/16/2024 2:45:00 PM

Dear Beryl, Love, grace, and poetry have the power to change the world, and your moving words show how this is possible. Your lyrical poetry is like sunshine: it dispels all shadows and spreads delight. Good luck with the contest.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/16/2024 3:09:00 PM

Thank you so much Sotto, I believe those things can change the world, so much can come from written words. I see poetry as the language of love and it starts with us, poets everywhere write on… Beryl

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/16/2024 5:59:00 AM

Dear Beryl, Your heartfelt words illuminate the profound impact one soul can have on the world through love, grace, and the gift of poetry. Your poetic verses radiate warmth, spreading joy like rays of sunshine dispelling darkness. Ahh.. the authentic spirit shines as a beacon, inspiring others to wholeheartedly live with open hearts and embrace life's beauty. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/16/2024 6:21:00 AM

Thank you poet pal Daniel, yes it’s true that someone can impact upon your soul, just by being the person they are, at times a beacon in the dark. I truly appreciate your kind words. Blessings in return to you dear friend… Beryl