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If Only She Saw What I Saw

before time invented beauty, she lay, stunning and exquisite- words came like the zephyr wind and the breeze filled her soul with brilliant ballades her quill filled her parchment as the essence of her pain became a beacon for twilit shadows; she held innocence that could not be written- verses upon verses could only be sung by divinity, rhymes and poetics could only be written from grief and loss now i see her lay there, glasses swooping down her nose; messy hair manic eyes, as she writes intensely from a depth so deep even the gods can't comprehend for she is still STUNNING and EXQUISITE to me... longing to be free, from death’s debris _____________________________________ written: 1.13.20

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Date: 1/16/2020 11:05:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Laura, congratulations your win. Eve
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Date: 1/15/2020 5:22:00 PM
Hi LuLoo, Congratulations on your winning placement. I like the way the poem moves through time seamlessly.
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Date: 1/13/2020 11:16:00 PM
Your pen is divine and entrancing words are freely flowing.. Good one..
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