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If I Were Looney

On the bus I pass by a building We refer to as the looney bin I can’t help but be looking I see patients that aren’t locked in They hang out catching a ray of sun While smoking with an air of chagrin They never look like they’re having fun I think if I were in the looney ward I’d want to escape the blah phenomenon I’d want to pretend I won some big award For being crazy happy with no reason And I’d be laughing all day as my reward They could accuse me of flaming treason I wouldn’t care I’d be spreading christmas joy No matter what the time or season In the looney bin I’d whop it up like a real McCoy AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted on April 13, 2019 for contest QUIRKY TERCETS sponsored by NINA PARMENTER

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Date: 4/28/2019 6:44:00 AM
love this idea! Might as well live it up and make a party out of it! ;)
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Date: 4/28/2019 6:52:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, PS.

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