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If I Could Be Love

My last first kiss begs to brush across your thirsting lips   surrender with me to the night   to the way of the wind,   graceful in flight   dancing freely   out over a moonlit sea   glowing in glory   as we both now breathe     come put yours into mine   let pure warmth overcome   and burn your name   into the marrow of my soul     If I could be love,   I would be you     a port of protection   where the waters lie still   and hopeless has come to rest     feeling all your feels     my head nestled upon your chest   listening to your music   a heartbeat on fire   euphoric and filled with desire     If I could be love,   I would be you   and you could be me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/6/2018 8:42:00 AM
Congrats on Potd Tim, with this beauty!
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Date: 9/5/2018 1:30:00 AM
SO beautiful. I see it got POTD Congrats on a worthy honor.
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Date: 9/4/2018 8:57:00 PM
I just came back to retract my first comment! You bumped me here,I am so upset!!!!! for sure I am sending you a BILL for that!!!! Cheers, and all kidding aside great poetry!!!!!
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Date: 9/4/2018 7:38:00 PM
Returning with congratulations, Tim, for your well deserved recognition with POTD honors for your exquisite poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/4/2018 7:21:00 PM
What a beautiful poem Tim, Congrats on POTD !!!
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Date: 9/4/2018 5:16:00 PM
Enthralling write dear poet ! ("If I could be love, I would just be "her's")< words to be soon written by yours truly, inspired by you dear poet....I pray you mind not???...*winks....Beautiful write Tim....Much love, james
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Date: 9/4/2018 5:21:00 PM
P.S...Bravo for the recognition with regard this wonderful write dear poet (((((claps)))))
Date: 9/4/2018 3:38:00 PM
A great choice to be honored for POTD Tim. Congratulations! : )
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Date: 9/4/2018 2:56:00 PM
Well Deserved Potd...My fave ever of yours Tim.Hw beautifully spelled-The word Love.If only we all couldbe love to eachother..Awesome!
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Date: 9/4/2018 1:29:00 PM
This is really pretty Tim. Great work!
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Date: 9/4/2018 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD Tim :)
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Date: 9/4/2018 10:18:00 AM
Great writing, Tim, but then that's you. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/4/2018 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations Tim, on Poem of the Day. : ) Brandy
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Date: 9/4/2018 7:46:00 AM
Great poem, Tim. Congratulations on POTD
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Date: 9/4/2018 7:19:00 AM
Yay! Back for POTD! Congratulations Tim :)) xomo!
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Date: 9/4/2018 6:40:00 AM
Lovely Tim, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 9/4/2018 6:19:00 AM
What a beautiful romantic poem, Tim. Congrats on POTD. John
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Date: 9/4/2018 5:03:00 AM
You are love, and your poem is lovely...Congrats!!! on your POTD! Tim...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 9/4/2018 4:41:00 AM
wtg Tim congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/4/2018 4:07:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Tim. You always do "love' so well. You are such a romantic. Well done, mate.
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Date: 9/4/2018 2:58:00 AM
So gorgeous, Tim. So romantic. Congratulations on POTD, Gershon
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Date: 9/4/2018 2:22:00 AM
Very romantic verse Tim, congratulations on POTD. Tom
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Date: 9/3/2018 7:24:00 PM
Your pen overflows with beautiful romance in the silky grace of your tender verses, Tim. An absolutely gorgeous creation. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/3/2018 5:16:00 PM
If only there was more men like you, I fell in love with this poem. peace and love xoxoxo Aurore
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Date: 9/3/2018 11:29:00 AM
Romance seems to flow effortlessly from your pen Tim. Such a soft, beautiful and enchanting romantic poem.
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Date: 9/3/2018 8:38:00 AM
And this is the way it should be, being one with love- being with the one you love. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) Brandy
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