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If I dream my time is precious how will I feel when I wake up? I will be blessed that I was born on the seventh day of nineteen thirty seven, blushing cheeks, green eyes, black hair. If I dream my time is precious how will I feel when I wake up? I will provide medicine to my soul, cure my unbearable pains, never cry in the darkness control my uncontrollable tears, end my endless loneliness, forget all my sadness. If I dream my time is precious how will I feel when I wake up? I will treasure my freedom, eliminate any emotional conflicts, ignite my power to feel my pounding rhythms, crave to be loved by a lover. If I dream my time is precious how will I feel when I wake up? I will light up my flame with passion, look gracefully beautiful, to perceive a dance floor brighter than the moonlight, dance to the humming surrounding my shadow, together, we are exceptional. If I don't dream, how will I feel when I wake up? I will not weep, I will honor my expectations, the morrow is another day. I will nurture my awakening calmly, to feel a blissful sensation today, get lost in the depth of my emotions to perceive a future painted, with rainbow colors. My soul will survive with a diligent power, guide my spirit to envisage reality, not to abandon the precious age. I will amaze my passion to feel the urge to glide, through the abyss, tour an everlasting passage of peace. Therese Bacha 23 November 2013

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Date: 4/6/2015 6:55:00 PM
Anytime Terry, sometimes I get lost reading all the replies poetry soup keeps sending to my e-mail. I will be back fully this summer. Then, I can take my time, and read more of your poems. SO please, please visit my poems this summer, that way I can have you near my comment box.. I use my phone to comment, so it is hard searching for the poet my heart desires... Hugs and love LINDA
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Date: 4/5/2015 11:25:00 PM
Terry, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/6/2015 12:39:00 AM
Hello dearest PD, thank you again for everything, you were since day one we met here, my faithful trust worthy friend. I wish you all the best. Happy Easter to you to. Take care i will see u soon. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 11/1/2014 5:32:00 PM
Terry . . . I was checking out here one of your earlier writes. The dream metaphor is oh so powerful and compelling. Enjoyed this one immensely my dear. A Big "7" from me on this particular write!! (BTW, I will be working on some more romantic writes. I think I've found my voice for them now. We'll see what happens!!) I will stay in touch. Cheers and Best Wishes Always, Gary
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Gary Bateman
Date: 11/2/2014 2:30:00 PM
And Terry . . . My most humbling and heartfelt respect to you too!! Keep Writing!! Keep do all the good things!! Cheers, Gary
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Therese Bacha
Date: 11/1/2014 9:40:00 PM
Hi Gary, thank you so much, your review means so much to me, as I also read your love poem, and of course you are already a writer, an amazing one. For me I am still not very confident, but you do raise my self assurance. Thank you, and bless you young man. Much respect to you Terry xoxo
Date: 12/24/2013 5:35:00 AM
Theresa, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Therese Bacha
Date: 11/1/2014 9:44:00 PM
Hi PD, just jumped in to say hi, and apologize for my staying away most of last year to recently, coming back on and off. I want to know that you are doing great, as I have not seen you here for a while, since my dearest friend Lucy passed away. I am so happy you met her, and passed some time with her. You are such a sweet lady PD. Much love to you PD. Terry xoxo
Date: 12/11/2013 5:00:00 PM
It was nice to hear from you Terry , I'd like to see more of you xx Debbie ;}
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Date: 11/28/2013 11:09:00 AM
Beautiful philosophical thinking expressed in a marvelously poetic way! Thank you for sharing!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 12/11/2013 4:25:00 PM
Hi Demetrios, its so nice to see you again. I have been off this site, as I am with another one full time. I rarely have the time to pass by. I hope you are doing great. Things should be better with you. I am leaving to be with my boys for 6 months, I hope to able to pass again. Love Terry
Date: 11/24/2013 7:29:00 AM
- Beautiful dreams are relaxing and exciting .... - Nightmares and bad dreams are a burden ... - A lovlely written poem dear Terry! - Big hug!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Therese Bacha
Date: 12/11/2013 4:26:00 PM
Hi Anne, its so nice to see you again. I have been off this site, as I am with another one full time. I rarely have the time to pass by. I hope you are doing great. Things should be better with you. I am leaving to be with my boys for 6 months, I hope to able to pass again. Love Terry
Date: 11/24/2013 3:50:00 AM
If I dream, I want to dream as you do my friend! You have excellent dreams of wondrous powers and high expectations! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a glorious piece, such a grandiose poem, Great Work!!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 12/11/2013 4:27:00 PM
Hi Russell, its so nice to see you again. I have been off this site, as I am with another one full time. I rarely have the time to pass by. I hope you are doing great. Things should be better with you. I am leaving to be with my boys for 6 months, I hope to able to pass again. Love Terry

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