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Idle Pond

A pond kept unclean is detrimental to all that accretes to it. Pace, G INK-U-SCRIPT 05-24-2012

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 12/4/2019 4:01:00 AM

idle pond detrimental to all!

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/9/2014 9:47:00 PM

Hi Pace, This was interesting!! Loved it said so much in quick time. Thanks for sharing this write with us . Peace, Deborah

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/9/2013 10:04:00 PM

Great work

Chase Rhinehart

Date: 3/7/2013 12:52:00 PM

Greatly enjoyed, nice job.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/28/2012 6:21:00 AM

still waters run deep, many ways to read in to this little wonder,, hope you've had a good christmas, have a brilliant new year, like to see more poetry from you though

Doreen Wright

Date: 8/12/2012 11:47:00 PM

Yes...cleanliness is next to Godliness...great Haiku Ink...DEEP!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/18/2012 8:17:00 PM

Yes maam you are correct!!! Smiles thank you Doreen!!

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 8/3/2012 9:43:00 AM

Good day Pace! An "IDLE POND", is one that can also be a busy one.:) A short but encompassing write! Enjoying this Haiku! Best wishes to you....Mikki :)

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/18/2012 8:16:00 PM

Thank you Michelle always!! :)

Kathryn Collins

Date: 6/18/2012 12:21:00 PM

I love these three liners, INK-U-SCRIPT. Very wise and unique. AND you force me to my dictionary. love, Kathy

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/18/2012 8:13:00 PM

Thank you dearly Kathryn!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/16/2012 10:55:00 PM

...and it has the stagnant stench of death...hahah..super duper haiku...enjoying this read this evening!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/17/2012 9:59:00 PM

Thank you dearly for sharing with me!!!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 6/15/2012 11:57:00 AM

Well said, my friend! Perfect 575 meter, grammatically correct and a marvelous comma-less flow!! Best wishes, Keith

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/17/2012 9:59:00 PM

Thank you!!! Always welcome to visit anytime!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 6/8/2012 10:50:00 PM

Very true! Thanks for sharing and for your kind comments on my poem. Caroline. :)

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/11/2012 11:02:00 AM

Thank you for sharing with me!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/5/2012 9:43:00 PM

Hi, "Ink-U-Script" how are you? Stopping by to say hi.. I wanted to send you poets hugs, for a small tiny comment you made on your brothers last blog. Life"" yup, we get what we pay for, i bet many of us are not expecting any change back... xox..pd

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/6/2012 9:03:00 AM

I sent you soup mail..but thank you for the hugs and sharing your comments with me pd!!

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/4/2012 3:47:00 PM

So much gets said sometimes with so few words. A profound little write. I think sometimes my name should have been Billy Idle. :)

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/4/2012 8:56:00 PM

Thank you Robert always!!!

Keisha Davis

Date: 6/4/2012 7:43:00 AM

so true.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/4/2012 8:30:00 AM

Thank you for sharing with me today Keisha!! hugs

Sean L Sanders

Date: 6/2/2012 10:46:00 AM

Nicely done!!!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/2/2012 12:41:00 PM

Thanks Sean..!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/1/2012 12:49:00 PM

That is a good one..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I hope that your day has been good..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/2/2012 12:40:00 PM

Thank you kindly Sara..always!!