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Iceberg - Haiku

jagged meringue peaks etched on steel blue frosted skies perilous splendor Liz Reilly

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Kim Merryman

Date: 3/21/2012 3:49:00 PM

Great imagery, Liz. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 6:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Liz. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2012 5:06:00 PM

wow, I noticed below, I had faved this one a long time ago. It remains splendiforuous!!! Congrats again.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2012 8:52:00 PM

congrats Liz on an awesome win for these splendid words of Haiku luv..

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/16/2012 8:11:00 AM

Congrats, Liz. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2012 10:52:00 PM

liz, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2012 9:41:00 PM

oh my gosh, this is OUTSTANDING a FAVE for this. Just love the last line. love ALL of it.(congrats in Brian's contest, but i"d have given it first place)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2012 10:08:00 PM

congrats Liz on winning an HM for another great writer luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/16/2012 2:51:00 PM

Great caliber..The descriptiveness is excellent..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/15/2012 9:15:00 PM

Congratulations, Liz! Amazing haiku. Blessings, Rhonda

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/15/2012 4:09:00 PM

Liz, where do I start with this one. I write a lot of Haiku's and this one is wonderful. Form wise, it's spot on. You have both the 'season' and 'cut' words. You use highly descriptive words and paint a complete picture. This is what a Haiku should look like, in my humble opinion. Outstanding job. Congrats on winning HM in Brian's contest............................S.Ronthorpe

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/15/2012 2:12:00 PM

Brian liked this, and so do I. Congratulations on your win Liz.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/15/2012 12:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Brian Strand's "Short & Sweet" contest Liz. Love, Carol