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Ice Blue Heart

Your heart is cruel and made of frigid steel a sharpened chisel is your angry tongue and with your tool you carve the pain I feel each time all of your hurtful words are flung You slash me as you twist the words I say within you no compassion can be found as pieces of my heart are chipped away and die in crimson piles upon the ground I question what lies in your evil mind you act as if you are too blind to see the way you hurt me with your words unkind and how your vicious tool has damaged me Why do you say you love me like you do when your cold heart is dead and icy blue?

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Elaine George

Date: 10/22/2009 7:25:00 AM

Emoitionally stirring. HEART-FELT. Great writing, Robin. Love, Lainie.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/28/2009 8:07:00 PM

Dear Robin, I do not understand how anyone can make another feel so unloved that they Write such a morbid POEM as this Why do they say I LOVE YOU? I hope this is a POEM with no basis in Truth ALWAYS...HG

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 2/28/2009 8:37:00 PM

Hi you! This is a flawless sonnet... excellent in every way. BRAVO Robin!! Love and hugs, Keith

Date: 2/28/2009 10:33:00 AM

Too bad so many wield words that cause lasting pain. I'm sure many will relate to this piece. The emotion comes through your words. Thank you for the kind comments. Keep on writing. Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/28/2009 10:12:00 AM

Excellent work Robin, this sonnet is wonderful...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 2/28/2009 12:34:00 AM

You tell it as it is in this one Robin.Well done.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments (my footle referred to 'political correctness') Have good weekend

John Rhinem

Date: 2/27/2009 9:06:00 PM

....I find it soo very hard to believe, that 'Anyone' would 'Ever' intentionately try to hurt "You" within 'Any' way dear!!!? But it sincerely makes me sad, to think that 'Anyone Ever' would!!!? "Your Heart Is 'Always' So Beautiful!!!!"~"My Love Always To 'You & Your Loves, Forever, John!!!"~Sweet Dreams Dear Robin!!!:)

John Rhinem

Date: 2/27/2009 9:01:00 PM

....amid their gentleness and sincerety of lovely; which is always so easily seen!!! Thus, stirring the heart of Your readers, within whatever topic You choose!!!? In this case here; making ones heart, wish to reach out just to hold You, and tell You that "Your Beauty Shall Always Be Alright!!!"~"Hello Gifted & Priceless & Lovely Robin!!!"....cont....

John Rhinem

Date: 2/27/2009 8:55:00 PM

Ahh, this truly breaks my heart~for as I have said unto You before "Precious Robin," You have this gift of ablity which is very rare indeed, to pour soul upon the written pages of which You write, and make them come to life, as they rise unto readers own heart, soul and eyes!!!.... cont....

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/27/2009 7:13:00 PM

Robin this is a very emotional write that I believe many people face - In fact in all honesty I have worn those boots when i was on dope - Cold as dry ice - My thoughts and prayers are with You hon - God Bless, YF4L, mj

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/27/2009 5:07:00 PM

crimson piles on the ground(9)/ upon the ground (10)you act, as if, you are too blind to see...yup yup good one honey! Light & Love Debbie Better title maybe? Ice Blue Heart?

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 2/27/2009 3:05:00 PM

Wow very strong write filled with emotion stirring anger! One pain is so sad though, but I do like this wonderful write! Laura :)

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 2/27/2009 1:06:00 PM

wow! this so filled with anger and sadness.....it flows so well and conveys your feelings perfectly.....I hope u feel all happy soon!...love Maryam*

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/27/2009 12:56:00 PM

Ooooh Robin, one of your best. Excellent expression, just so sorry it is on the disturbing subject of personal pain. This has to feel so good to have written. I just want to hug and support you and say you go girl! An outstanding write. Hope you are feeling better soon. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/27/2009 12:54:00 PM

Robin, who could hurt you this way? Inquiring minds want to know! Check your soupmail. And thanks for reading "Robbing the Dead." I took your advice. Carolyn

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/27/2009 11:53:00 AM

While the form and flow are perfect, the content leaves me sad knowing that someone would do all this. I hope for the best for you, very good writing. Michael

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/27/2009 11:42:00 AM

excelent! goes with my new piece"the bitter end" heart felt pain hoping this is not the real case but knowing how real it could be. these things are temporary till love begins again. John H Loving III

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/27/2009 10:59:00 AM

Well done, Robin...the anger, and the reality shouts in this piece, as well it should!! ~ love, Carrie

Randy Biffany

Date: 2/27/2009 10:49:00 AM

Wow Robin! A hardened heart can be vicious. I thought your chisel analogies captured your pain, well painfully. Keep writing. It is such an outlet for bottled emotion and you obviously have a way with words. I am sorry for your emotional suffering. Randy

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/27/2009 10:47:00 AM

The voice in this piece really fire shots with the tongue..so well expressed..I can feel the disgust and disappointment in the piece..some wonderful lines..well done Robin.