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I Tango With the Winds

+ U p to the blue cotton - candy clouds in my pretty rainbow dress, I softly sing along with the anthem of Western Winds. Airy and light, I'm lured- being invited to sway so slow, swirling in intimate tango with the cool - sweet breeze. Breathing anew, I clamor for more, I dip and dive. With snaps in my tail, I soar high! High like a ship sailing the playful tides of the blowing winds, mounting from lows ~ to ~ peaks but as the wind rest to relax I fell down too, / f a L L, / b u t \ a s / n e w w i n d / g u s t s, \ I / r i s e \ a n d / r u n / t o the heavens I dare to go ! / To my Master, I will be attached, forevermore. ________________________________________________________________ SPONSOR: Broken Wings Contest Name: Creative Layouts ~~1st Place~~ O.E. Guillermo 6:08 pm, October 20, 2015

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Date: 10/30/2015 7:56:00 AM
splendid``` great``` beautiful``` awesome and well expressed. As always, beautiful lines from a creative mind. Definitely a 7
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Date: 10/28/2015 10:50:00 AM
Love it - proud to share top spot with you!
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Date: 10/27/2015 9:35:00 PM
Olive, Nice win Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/26/2015 10:51:00 PM
This is so so lovely!! Congrats on your fantastic win!! :D :D
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Date: 10/26/2015 9:21:00 AM
Your kite flying high is so free and creative, Olive! Congrats on your great win!
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Date: 10/26/2015 7:41:00 AM
Your poem and high flying kite are a magnificent match Olive. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 10/26/2015 12:51:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb first place win with this creative layout n wonderful poetry dear Olive! Love kites!
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Date: 10/25/2015 8:25:00 PM
Olive, congratulations on your win beautiful write!
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Date: 10/25/2015 8:22:00 PM
Wonderful poem a7 and congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/25/2015 7:13:00 PM
Great poem and wonderful artistry with your creative layout, Olive! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/25/2015 5:50:00 PM
wow, very very clever, girl. A very well deserved win. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/25/2015 4:55:00 PM
Wonderful Olive, very creative shape and lovely poem.
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Date: 10/25/2015 3:04:00 PM
This is both elegant and delightful, Olive. Congrats on this winner!
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Date: 10/25/2015 1:24:00 PM
Olive, congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/25/2015 12:59:00 PM
I knew when I first read this that it was a winner. I'm so happy for you, Olive...This was your first, now get busy and do another. ;)
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Date: 10/25/2015 12:13:00 PM
wow what a layout..!!!!!!!!! Nice Win Olive!!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/9/2015 2:28:00 AM
thanks much Michael.. =`)
Date: 10/25/2015 11:37:00 AM
No wonder this soared so high Olive - many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/9/2015 2:27:00 AM
thanks much JAn.. hugs!
Date: 10/23/2015 12:57:00 AM
How creative Olive! Love this write & the form too! A+++
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Date: 10/21/2015 8:09:00 PM
I love the creative wind shape AND poem in your great, windy write, Olive! I hope the wind makes your poem soar high in the contest! :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/28/2015 7:25:00 AM
It did Laura though I was thinking twice when I entered this one because it may seem usual already.. anyhow, the poem didn't only mean the kite but I also.. =`) thanks!
Date: 10/21/2015 4:30:00 PM
Excellent, Olive_eloi!!! Your words and creativity are soaring high...like your kite. Love the happy, playful feeling that you manage to convey. Well done! Hugs // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/25/2015 12:28:00 PM
...back with deserved congratulations!!:) Flying high...top place! Pleased to be sharing it with you! Virtual chocolate cakes on the way:) hugs // paul
Date: 10/20/2015 9:17:00 AM
LOL very creative! Me like...
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/22/2015 5:09:00 AM
thanks much Miles.. ;) am glad you like it!
Date: 10/20/2015 5:31:00 AM
This is wonderful, Olive. Not only do your words create the image of your kite flying high in the wind, but in your cleverness, you've also created the form of a kite. VERY well done! ~ Lin ~
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/22/2015 2:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Lin.. I so appreciate your most wonderful generous comment on my poem.. =`) my first try.. =`)

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