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I Remember You My Lover

I REMEMBER YOU my lover HOW LONELINESS HAD SMUGGLED OUR LIVES OUR JOURNEY STARTED WITH PURE VERSES WHEN I SAW THAT LOVE IN YOUR EYES I REMEMBER MY LOVE. I do REMEMBER TODAY MY HEART WRITHES, THE SORROW OF SEPARATION WEAKENS MY HEART… ONE MORE TIME… I WISH TO MERGE IN YOUR DREAMS, DRINK THE WINE OF YOUR LIPS FEEL THE WARMTH OF YOUR ARMS RUN INTO YOUR VEINS And rest ON YOUR STURDY SHOULDER Now TEARS HAVE BARGED INTO MY LIFE HAPPINESS HAS DESERTED MY WORLD INSOMNIA HAS blinded my sleep BUT MY LOVER I YEARN FOR YOU I SINK INTO YOUR DEEP THOUGHTS THE RIVERS HAVE BECOME SILENT BIRDS DON’T SING ANYMORE LEAVES HAVE FALLEN disgracefully THE AROMATIC FLOWERS HAVE VANISHED FEW DEAD LETTERS ARE STRUGGLING TO BREATH YOUR VOICE ECHOES In the valley of my heart. I remember our unbreakable bond Time destroys everything. Oh my lover I remember How I loved you With all my heart I remember my love , I do remember…

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John-Ovan.P. Hull

Date: 3/12/2016 10:10:00 AM

Wow, very powerful and and emotional! It sounds like the two of your are meant to achieve great things together?

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/24/2013 5:55:00 AM

HEART TOUCHING VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITING

Red Fiery
Date: 3/10/2016 8:09:00 PM

thank you !

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/22/2013 6:20:00 AM

This is truly one of your best! Consider changing your first line to " I remember you my lover" it fits better being you are speaking to him. You should be very proud of this piece. Rated a 7 if I could go higher I would.

Red Fiery
Date: 3/10/2016 8:11:00 PM

I personally like this work as it's about me ......thank you for reading this long time back...love Red

Allan Koven

Date: 9/20/2013 9:49:00 AM

When a heart breaks, it is yours. When love is in bloom, it is yours. When sparks become fiery, it is yours. You who blossoms in loves grace become a living metaphor. Aphrodite,is it you? Allan

Red Fiery
Date: 9/20/2013 10:34:00 AM

* SMILING*.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/19/2013 9:39:00 AM

- You have a part of his heart .... forget you? No, he never does. - Well written, Red. - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Red Fiery
Date: 9/20/2013 10:34:00 AM

Thank u. ANNE

Wayne Hill

Date: 9/18/2013 9:27:00 PM

I was the first person to read this :) Your poetry could fill dozens of expensive books.......your mind is like a rare alpine valley brimming with unequaled life.

Red Fiery
Date: 3/10/2016 8:12:00 PM

You are very kind !

Red Fiery
Date: 9/19/2013 1:02:00 AM

thank you wayne...u have always been kind to me :) I am happy to see ur comments...* Hugs*