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I Long To Be

Darkness uncovered dusty white sheets pushed aside tweets spilled out break the silence as I'm perched inside Oh how I long to be . . . that bird outside your window singing there for all to see sweet songs of freedom floating in angelic air a rich blaze of blue lasting liberation caressing and undressing the insides of you I long to be . . . drifting in your winds feeling distant paradise in every simple kiss of your loving sun but here I remain encaged, your dawn momentarily shining down onto these painfully painted rails yesterday's imagination molts and the seeds of life lay lost at the bottom of discontent

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/30/2018 4:31:00 PM
Whenever I read your poems, I know romance is not dead Tim.
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Date: 3/25/2018 5:13:00 AM
Good Morning Tim - I have no words other than to say this is beautiful and very much poetry. All is well within your entry words and execution. Well done
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Date: 3/24/2018 8:28:00 PM
Came back to read again!Very beautiful, really liked that second verse. :)
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Date: 3/24/2018 11:35:00 AM
Swept up to be scattered spent, delicious poetry.
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Date: 3/24/2018 9:31:00 AM
Hi Tim , beautiful write my friend very emotional ::))))
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Date: 3/24/2018 5:31:00 AM
A touch of sadness but oh so so beautiful, Tim! "I long to be . . . drifting in your winds feeling distant paradise in every simple kiss of your loving sun"....I love it!
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Date: 3/24/2018 2:59:00 AM
Not only did I love this poem, it make me smile to read the romance, even with the twinge of sadness.
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Date: 3/23/2018 6:17:00 PM
Girls just don't have a chance do they Timmy lol
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Date: 3/23/2018 12:29:00 PM
Such longing in your lines tim, I long to be as good as you for writing this style of poem! Love the alliteration adding to my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/23/2018 11:12:00 AM
A beautifully written poem full of longing. Well done Tim. Have a nice day :)
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