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I HEAR GOD I hear the raucous scolding of the jay as the neighbor's cat wanders into our yard – and I hear God I hear the delightful squeals of children in the playground spinning furiously on the merry-go-round – and I hear God I hear the rumble of thunder preceding the approaching summer shower – and I hear God I listen as the raindrops play a staccato on the window pane – and I hear God I sit and listen after the rain has passed, and hear the gentle sighing of the wind in the pines – and I hear God I walk on the seashore late in the evening and hear the soothing splash of the waves as they break ceaselessly on the the beach – and I hear God I hear the soft, rhythmic sounds of my wife's breathing as she lies sleeping next to me – and I hear God I hear the words of a much loved hymn being sung by the choir – and I hear God I hear the still small voice whispering words of love and encouragement in my heart – and I hear God God is all around us – Do you hear Him?

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Date: 6/24/2020 11:45:00 PM
Wonderful! I really enjoyed this. I thought I would check on you this early morning. I hope all is well with you and yours.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/26/2020 4:40:00 PM
No worries friend! I'm glad we are on the top side of the grass! :)
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 6/25/2020 9:05:00 AM
Tim, I had such a busy day yesterday that I missed your checking in on me! Thank you, my friend, for your thoughtfulness, your support, and your lasting friendship!
Date: 5/23/2020 6:52:00 PM
This was a lovely re-read. LOVE your form with the beautiful short refrain that adds a lot to the poem. (I think I would add a "too" as the last word in your poem ~ but that's only me)
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 6/25/2020 9:03:00 AM
My apology for this late response. I am pleased that you took the time to re-read it. It is one of my favorites in my entries.
Date: 4/2/2020 2:05:00 PM
Thanks for sharing my friend. You help us to hear him more with this poem. Congrats.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 4/3/2020 8:54:00 AM
Thanks so much, Curtis! If we don't share Him, there may be some who never hear. I appreciate the growing number of poets who have, in the past year or two, have been acknowledging Him. I would like to think, not egotistically, but spiritually, that I was one of the poets who began that change.
Date: 4/2/2020 4:19:00 AM
Congrats on your win. I like the format as each stanza ends with I hear God. Well done!
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 4/2/2020 5:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Krish, for your kind comment on the format I used for my entry in James' conest. It just occurred to me as I was writing it and it stuck.
Date: 4/2/2020 2:23:00 AM
Wonderful write beautifully done congrats on your placement my contest... Glory Write on! James
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 4/2/2020 5:17:00 AM
Thank you, my Brother for sponsoring such a great contest but most of all for granting me a 1st place win! What an honor!
Date: 3/2/2020 12:55:00 PM
Beautiful, Curtis. Lovely poem.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/6/2020 12:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line! I have practically been shunned on Soup for some reason. 130 views on this poem and only 3 comments. Is it because it acknowledges God? He is, after all, the Creator of Heaven and Earth and all that is within!
Date: 2/15/2020 4:46:00 PM
Great write Curtis, superbly penned and love your challenging question at the end. Trust all well with you, over here it's very stormy and set as today it's rained non stop all day. Blessings always,Gordon
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 2/16/2020 11:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Gordon! I am always blessed and encouraged by your comments. The weather in your area sounds identical to what we have been experiencing in this part of Georgia. The good part of it is that my lawn looks like a well manicured golf course. Blessings on you as well, my friend!
Date: 1/28/2020 4:18:00 PM
Very nice Curtis and so true. I wrote one similar called "A Little Bit of Heaven" check it out if you get a chance.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/28/2020 8:00:00 PM
Thanks, Tim, for the nice comment and for the info on your similar poem. I'm going to read it now.

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