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I Give You All

I give you all my Life dear Lord O yes, I give you everything I give you all my hopes and dreams Because in you my heart now sings Because you mean so much to me I give you all my life dear Lord You are the way the truth I see I know you are the Living Word It is your word that cuts so deep To expose what should not be I give you all my life dear Lord So I can be so truly free No other one can offer joy Just like you have in store for me I'll do my best to hear well done I give you all my life dear Lord Entered in a A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE' Contest on 5/26/2022

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/27/2022 10:45:00 AM

Well done verse of praise and prayer. Thank you ,Charles, for the correction.. I wasn't paying attention, just trying to hurry.

Eve Roper
Date: 5/28/2022 6:16:00 AM

Thank you again, Charles, this is the Pantoum form, and I am totally spacing it again especially for a contest ...Thank you... I am 71 and realizing I need to stay focused.

Charles Reese
Date: 5/27/2022 9:08:00 PM

Thank you for review. I'm glad you took my suggestion, but you only did it to one line. You should fix the repeating line as well.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2022 9:33:00 AM

Inspiring poem. I love the form you used.

Charles Reese
Date: 5/27/2022 9:04:00 PM

Thank you, I love this style it is so easy to write in it.