I Echo

I Chos e chos Candle in darkness, Haunting silence, Memories folding, Dead to the touch, Like the cold barrel, Its eternal kiss, Death’s echo, I await, Wait, It, I, Echo!

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 11/5/2023 3:07:00 AM

Very compelling Mat. Thanks

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/6/2023 7:52:00 AM

appreciated jeff

Regina Elliott

Date: 11/3/2023 6:04:00 AM

Hello Mat, an eerie, haunting, and compelling short poem. You have a mastery of words and verse. Leave the reader wanting to read more. Much creativity to you. ~

Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/3/2023 1:47:00 PM

thank you for reading

Lionel Derbyshire

Date: 10/23/2023 10:13:00 PM

I echo for a part 2 .. there so much learning here Great flow ... The reader glows.

Mat Ignacio
Date: 10/27/2023 7:53:00 PM

thank you for this -

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/16/2023 1:59:00 PM

A very clever verse Mat. Powerful with a great choice of well chosen words. I love the way, like Sara said, how it is constructed and brilliant how you have conveyed the echoes of the words back. Impressive. Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing :) :)

Mat Ignacio
Date: 10/16/2023 3:13:00 PM

Kindest regards -

Paige Hind

Date: 10/12/2023 3:03:00 PM

I liked this. Very unique...

Mat Ignacio
Date: 10/16/2023 3:13:00 PM

Thank you for this -