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I Drew a Blank

Arranging his pens, he thought to himself She said she wanted me to draw her love and showcase it at my art show next week Abstract or traditional...what to do? I could try to capture her bubbly smile She is effervescence personified... Or turn my canvas into a mirror to draw her eyes, ah...there would be her soul Can her love be seen in flower blossoms So many types of petals and colors A sunrise may showcase her love's luster Though beauty may be found in a sunset Sunset indeed...he decides what to draw... Art show opens to much paparazzi They can't wait to see how he drew her love Big reveal...and she can't quite catch her breath He says... Breathtaking huh? Hard decision... Focus on the rapture you used to give or on the desolation I feel now Yes, I know...you don't love me any more Surprised? Only because I know the truth How cruel to request me to draw your love How can I draw what no longer exists? So, that being the case, I drew a blank... 5/12/16

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Date: 6/5/2016 6:56:00 PM
Amazing poem, Dineen, very well-written with great imagery and a twist at the end! Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. Sandra
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 6/9/2016 8:00:00 AM
Such a wonderful compliment Sandra, thank you for that and for congratulating me!
Date: 6/2/2016 10:22:00 PM
Dineen, love your treatment of the contest with this ingenious theme. I especially like the subtle "twist" in the last couplet. Nicely written with intriguing metaphoric colors. Thanks for entering the contest
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 6/4/2016 11:39:00 AM
Such a wonderfully in depth critique, so nice of you John. I appreciate that, as well as your kind consideration in being placed in your contest. Thank you!
Date: 5/12/2016 8:20:00 PM
I enjoyed your impression of drawing a blank, Dineen. Very nice interpretation. Good luck in the contest.
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/13/2016 11:45:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, I'm looking forward to reading the different interpretations. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/12/2016 5:27:00 PM
Great last line...Sunset would best be suited for a dying love...Great write Dineen...
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 5/13/2016 11:42:00 AM
Yes a sunset would be, a dying love is never easy, thank you much Joseph.

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