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I Could Still Dance

I could still dance, if only in my dreams Music takes me back to Where I want to be A time of joy and happiness A time where there was only now No emptiness Free Of all pain and sorrow So I could dance, until tomorrow Music is the energy That flows inside of me Without a doubt I think about How wonderful it would be If I had the opportunity To intrepid my dance for all to see The way music sets me free

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Date: 8/13/2021 2:27:00 AM
Excellent poem, and rhyming sequence, my sister of God's inspirational grace, Mary. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message. The descriptive excellence is lovely. The theme is on point, and the tone moves your words with much grace. "The higher reality of consciousness enhances peace, love, harmony, and happiness in our hearts with actions we connectively and collectively accomplished through faith." –Professor, Ambassador, Dr. Joseph S. Spence Sr. (Epulaeryu Master)!
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Date: 4/4/2015 7:12:00 PM
Mary, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 3/28/2015 3:53:00 PM
Music takes me back to Where I want to be A time of joy and happiness - music is a blessing
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Date: 2/27/2015 3:07:00 PM
Your words make my spirit dance. Feel the music in the mind and dance, even if the body is slow to move, the soul is quick to hear :)
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