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I Can'T Take It Anymore

When I was a younger man, I gave my love to only one. She put his ring on her left hand; I took my heart to walk alone. I swore, then, always to be free; no one to tug upon my reins. When I felt love close in on me, I'd bust the stall; avoid the pain. But I can't take it anymore; down on my knee, here on your floor. I took my love; walked out their doors, but I can't take it anymore. I want to give you all my heart; so many years, I couldn't share. I want to give you all the love, I took when I just couldn't care. And if you feel you must say no, then I will try to understand, but I'll leave my love, my heart, my soul. I'll have no use for them again. 'Cause I cant take it anymore; down on my knee, here on your floor. I took my love; walked out their doors, but I can't take it anymore. No, I can't take it anymore; down in my knee, here on your floor. I took my love; walked out their doors, but I can't take it anymore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/22/2017 11:51:00 AM
well crafted into an eye-romancing beauty... Your lines and words are just lovely... Its nice visiting one of your pages again..
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Date: 6/9/2017 11:44:00 AM
Did you used to be a man? :):):) It's nice when someone writes from an engendered perspective. You have bared you heart compassionately here Arlene. Though I'm sure the pain has no gender. Her, him, it's hurts just the same. I miss your wonderful sensibility. I hope you find your muse again and treat us to some more writes. :)
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Date: 2/10/2017 4:31:00 PM
Hi Arlene. This is very good and I wonder if you had a melody in mind when you wrote it. I could hear it as a country song. I'd say you did a great job with this first attempt at lyrics. Thanks for sharing, my friend....... Robert.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 2/15/2017 12:52:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend!.. I tried to get a melody, but it kept going back to George Jones' "He Stopped Loving Her Today".
Date: 1/23/2017 11:52:00 AM
This is really really good writing, I can visualize the music, the cadence is easy to follow! A7
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Arlene Smith
Date: 1/23/2017 12:02:00 PM
Thank you for such generous encouragement on my first attempt at lyrics my friend!!

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