I Await

Wide awake in the pitch of night is when they come drifting in and out dreams dancing between real and fantasy declaration sits within the heart and is always felt each time different but the same the longing oft remains and roams the thrums, the whirrs easing me off to you caressing those night time blues staring then stirring how can I await as time passes by slowly but surely you wait too

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/9/2018 8:22:00 AM

Hopefully she does wait. I do appreciate your imagery, you get to the heart of emotion.

Tim Smith
Date: 7/9/2018 1:15:00 PM

Thanks Rick

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/9/2018 1:25:00 AM

We wait for love, then death! OMG thats a good quote!!!! :) Loved the poem.

Tim Smith
Date: 7/9/2018 1:12:00 PM

Sometimes they come at the same time

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/8/2018 9:50:00 PM

This is so beautiful, dreamy and romantic. Love is patient. Your thoughts caress the page with such grace. ~ Brandy

Tim Smith
Date: 7/9/2018 1:14:00 PM

Thank you so much Brandy

Lyric Man

Date: 7/8/2018 8:56:00 PM

Heartfelt masterpiece.. your muse is strong right now, keep writing!!!

Tim Smith
Date: 7/9/2018 1:14:00 PM

Thank you Dave

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/8/2018 2:55:00 PM

wait wait wait, in the in between breaths of fate... hugs x

Tim Smith
Date: 7/9/2018 1:14:00 PM

Always waiting

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/8/2018 8:14:00 AM

Excellent and well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Tim Smith
Date: 7/9/2018 1:14:00 PM

Thank you Ravi

Lin Lane

Date: 7/8/2018 7:36:00 AM

In an identical dreamscape you will find the one you seek. Send your coordinates.;-) Seriously, it's filled with longing and expressed sorrowfully, but beautifully. This reminds me of a verse in Robert Brownings poem 'A Woman's Last Word... " —-Must a little weep, Love,/ (Foolish me!)/ And so fall asleep, Love,/ Loved by thee."

Tim Smith
Date: 7/9/2018 1:13:00 PM

Don't you get me blushing : ))

Moon Flower

Date: 7/8/2018 7:26:00 AM

Surely, she beckons to wait. Well done. ;)

Tim Smith
Date: 7/9/2018 1:12:00 PM

I hope so Moon

Jan Allison

Date: 7/8/2018 7:21:00 AM

a joy to read your lovely lines today Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 7/9/2018 1:12:00 PM

Thank you Jan :)