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I Am An Eagle

As father gave the push, my mother whispered, “Fly, my child!” Resplendent in my feathers, yet was frightened of the wild unknown for that where I grew up, I had to leave and find the reason for my wings and claws, and how I can’t be mild. The rush of warm wind cushioned me as I took my first flight, majestic bird who gracefully flew to such soaring heights. From that day on I fed myself and did my parents proud for they have taught me not to let the prey escape my sight. For forty years I roamed the land and soared over the sea, but then the time had come to make the choice that’s hard for me. Up on the steepest rocky mount, I went and by my own removed my brittle beak, talons, and old wings painfully. Why did I have to go through all the changes and the pain? Those parts were worn and have become my weakness and my bane. So now that God has given me another thirty years, behold me after my rebirth, the eagle soars again! *For those who would care to see,this is a 3-min video on the eagle's painful rebirth https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yXTrWPvP0iQ Eagles: illumination of spirit, healing, creation, Divine, Spirit (feathers are sacred healing tools) PICTURE YOURSELF AS A BIRD POETRY CONTEST - 9th Place SPONSOR: ANDREA DIETRICH 13 May 2015

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Date: 7/16/2015 2:45:00 PM
:~) a 7 for this magnificent poem. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/17/2015 8:23:00 AM
I did visit the website, oh did I learn a few things thank you for sharing. hugs eve
Date: 5/26/2015 12:38:00 PM
Hi Kim, I've been away for 10 days, still catching up with PS! Congratulations on your fine win for your very informative poem about the eagle! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/24/2015 8:39:00 PM
Kim, congrats on your win! A very informative write! Love, Kim M
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:16:00 PM
Kim, Congratulations on your awesome Bird win @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/24/2015 8:04:00 AM
Very cool, watch the video, posted it on Facebook, congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/23/2015 11:18:00 PM
Amazing win. Love this one, Kim. outstanding imagery. SK
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Date: 5/23/2015 9:50:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Kim...
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Date: 5/23/2015 8:55:00 PM
You really did a great job defining the meaning of the eagle. WOW, I just went to see that video finally. you really did great to base your poem on the changes the eagle makes to himself. Wish we could all do that with our aging bodies!!
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Date: 5/18/2015 6:48:00 AM
You chose a majestic bird to write about.. Absolutely loved this write of yours. Wishing you the best for the contest with this beauty Kim :)
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Date: 5/17/2015 2:37:00 PM
I saw an eagle about a month ago and they are very majestic animals... Your personification of this bird is beautiful and very moving... Good luck in Andrea's contest. This should do well, Kim!
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Date: 5/16/2015 8:34:00 PM
Powerfully written Kim.. :)! Galing galing.. :)!~olive eloisa
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Date: 5/16/2015 7:48:00 PM
Kim, you have created a poem that in and of itself is beautiful. But it is much more than that: It celebrates a magnificent creature, and—by extrapolation—helps us to have reverence for all living things. Yes, I love it.
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Date: 5/16/2015 6:37:00 PM
AWESOME POEM!!. And an Eagle you are! I loved this write and seeing you fly! A 7. God Bless!! Ed
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Date: 5/16/2015 1:06:00 PM
Hi! my lovely friend, it's a magic of majestic bird wonderfully crafted without any miss. Good luck in the contest. 7++ with your wining wishes. Loved always,bl
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Date: 5/16/2015 12:17:00 PM
Hi Kim. I love this expressive poem and the way it is written. A very fascinating fact about the eagle that has always given me chills when I see one, and we see many here in Montana. You have deepened my respect for these wonderful birds. Thanks so much for the wonderful poem and the education..... Robert.
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Date: 5/15/2015 6:37:00 AM
Perfectly expressed...A high-soaring eagle indeed. 7+
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Date: 5/14/2015 9:29:00 PM
You have given me an idea, when I am about 90, I am going to break my nose and cut off my toes, then see if I can live for another 70 years!!!!
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Date: 5/14/2015 9:28:00 PM
What a great write, I did not know this, very interesting!!!! I have to say though, I see you as more of a beautiful Dove!
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Date: 5/14/2015 9:46:00 AM
Sad but with a great outcome..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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Date: 5/14/2015 1:13:00 AM
Truly, we are intimately related to an eagle with all the struggle, the path we choose, and all the pain to go through are all parts in reaching our highest goals. To soar like an eagle with so much confidence, pride and hope. A lovely read this morning, Kim. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 5/13/2015 10:45:00 PM
I was able to observe the bald eagles one summer in Alaska -- they are truly magnificent birds . . . your words about the eagle reminded me of Isaiah's words: "but those who hope in the LORD will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; they will run and not grow weary, they will walk and not be faint." I see your spirit soaring -- it takes my breath away! 7
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Date: 5/13/2015 7:45:00 PM
G'day Kim... enjoyed your rhyming pattern in this poem. The eagle has always been classed as the bird of strength and ruler of the skies but they too must reassess their needs for survival. Thank you Kim - Lindsay
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Date: 5/13/2015 4:22:00 PM
Life's journey, passing from one stage to another, while becoming even stronger in the process. Your choice of the eagle was ideal; the content expressive and clever. gl in the contest. #7 Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/13/2015 3:52:00 PM
Divine bird and poem....every year 50 to 100 eagles migrate south down the Mississippi to the Illinois river and hole up by Starved Rock State Park....I've visited many times...only an hours drive....they are magnificent creatures
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Date: 5/13/2015 3:33:00 PM
Wonderful poem about the Regal Eagle, my favourite Bird of Prey Kim. Love the story in your poem. I haven't written about many animals, but Eagles I have so many times. Loved this, to my favs it goes, smiles, James :) :)
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