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Home » Poems » Punnia Viswan Bhatia » I Am a Kite

I Am a Kite

I am a kite Top at the height With the thread broken I know no rules I know no direction I know no boundaries Singing with the breeze Dancing with the storm and Moving with the blow All has become my fad now A flibbertigibbet, I am With the stars With the clouds and With the birds Feel so light Going high and high and high I am a kite Top at the height With the thread broken!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Doug Vinson
Date: 1/6/2017 7:49:00 PM
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Wow - over a year since the last comment. Really great poem, Puvi. : )
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 1/6/2017 10:15:00 PM
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Hai Doug...thank you for the motivating comment! love and peace :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/30/2015 7:40:00 AM
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must say very masterfully painted beautiful pen free a a bird the kite smiles
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/30/2015 9:13:00 AM
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:)) thank you for your time and comment liam....love and peace :))
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John Fleming
Date: 12/30/2015 2:28:00 AM
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Amazing what one can find tucked away in the corner of an old leather baccy pouch! My best regards for the coming New Year, mucker. :-) john
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/30/2015 9:21:00 AM
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thank you for your amazing comment and your time john :) wishing you a wonderful and peaceful new year ahead :))
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/27/2015 8:58:00 PM
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How truly wonderful it would be to soar so freely... Beautifully written and expressed. This poem was a joy to read! Nicely done :)
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/27/2015 9:18:00 PM
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thank you Kelly for stopping by and leaving a soothing comment :) love and hugs :*
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/20/2015 8:48:00 PM
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Love the last verse, one could read this many ways!
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/20/2015 9:15:00 PM
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yes I meant it arthur :) Thank you :)) God bless..
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/20/2015 11:30:00 AM
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A flibbertigibbet, are you? lol but oh oh! You've managed to get free? Nice little whimsical poem, Rem.
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/20/2015 8:46:00 PM
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Hahaha..;) thanks for the lovely comment dear..love and hugs..may God bless you with a lot of happinesa and peace..
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Eric Boddie
Date: 11/20/2015 10:47:00 AM
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I have been that high....where I could kiss the sky....passing cloud 9 by....just the simple truth, no lie....lol
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/20/2015 11:31:00 AM
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I always like the extra bonus of reading Eric's contribution. ;)
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 11/20/2015 10:50:00 AM
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hahahaha.....thank you rhymer... :) Love and peace..

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