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Hypnotic Twister

turbulent dark wind... tasmanian devil cloud... rotating descends… 2-13-17

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Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2017 2:04:00 PM

Cheryl you have penned a nice image

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/18/2017 2:15:00 PM

Thank you so much for kind comment and visit Broken Wings!~Che :)

Barry Stebbings

Date: 2/14/2017 2:25:00 PM

Excellent visual Haiku. Cheryl. // Barry

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/14/2017 7:01:00 PM

Thanks so much for kind comment and visit Barry!~Che :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/14/2017 1:21:00 PM

You nailed those twisters alright, Cheryl. An excellent haiku. Kudos to you for such a brilliant write. A 7 and a fave. Cool double combo. Love and hugs to you.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/14/2017 7:00:00 PM

You are very encouraging Freddie! Thanks for kind comment and visit!~L & hugs~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/13/2017 2:05:00 PM

- A great haiku, Cheryl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/13/2017 8:53:00 PM

Thanks so much for kind comment & visit Anne-Lise!-hugs Che :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 2/13/2017 8:45:00 PM

Thanks so much for kind comment & visit Anne-Lise!-hugs Che :)