Hypnotic

Huddled within the ocean’s liquid cocoon I slowly sway ‘tween heaven and earth lulled by twinkling, windswept ripples mesmerized by swells of mosaic shapes as gentle waves pulsate and surround I sit entranced, captivated by the hypnotic sea. Written on 8/23/2021

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/2/2021 11:47:00 AM

I was entranced and floating right there with you. Congrats on your top win Laura.

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/2/2021 6:42:00 PM

Thank you, Jeanne! So happy you liked this one. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/30/2021 3:30:00 PM

just love it Laura, I adore the motion of the sea it is mezmerising:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/30/2021 7:07:00 PM

Thanks so much, Jan! It’s good to hear from you and I’m glad you liked this one! :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/30/2021 10:52:00 AM

Such a vivid picture of the sea Laura - positively mesmerizing. One can feel the movements of the tides and oceans through our words. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/30/2021 7:07:00 PM

Thank you, Sam! So happy you enjoyed this! :)

Mohamed Omar

Date: 8/23/2021 9:36:00 AM

Floating with your words taking me to infinity ........thanks

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/23/2021 10:44:00 AM

So happy you enjoyed this one, Mohamed! :)