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Hymn of Affection

A love story without your happiness is a hoax a night without me is like a lion chased by the fox. Tender and shy, your soul is younger than nineteen I’ve won your heart, it’s time to open the curtain. Our energy loosely burn, already getting over-aged affection protests for it to get its wage. chocolate emotion needs to be born, I can feel its kick from theory to real, we need to accept its lick. My pillows are green, my sheets are violet there’s something from pleasure we need to collect. My hands search your waist for a treasure to pick and from our kiss, I share in your initiating lipstick. Through my erotic scavenging, your appeal and nudity dress body parts are stammering, as if in front of the press. While a part of us rub on each other and mingle others dance around each other and entangle. Void of an organogram, events play like a revolver the venue’s address is best situated in your vulva. I’ve evolved so that my genotype is triple ‘X’ of my entire life, this is absolutely the best sex.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/21/2019 2:26:00 AM
very sexy Funom:-) hugs Jan xx
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 5:32:00 AM
hugs, hugs, hugs Jan. Thank you very much
Date: 10/9/2019 9:29:00 AM
So glad to catch you up with this wonderful gem. The poetry awesome, one could say, just like sex.
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/15/2019 10:24:00 AM
Yes friend.. Its a great pleasure reading from u
Date: 9/12/2019 7:42:00 PM
Hi Funom, after reading, time for a cold shower. Hit! Hot! Hot! A wonderful write that keeps the reader engaged, from start to finish. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend....Mike.
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/15/2019 10:23:00 AM
Thank you so much friend
Date: 9/10/2019 8:50:00 AM
Full of passion and romance..you know your craft my friend..well done, Funom.
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/11/2019 12:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay Pandit... Thank you, thank you, thank you
Date: 9/9/2019 5:51:00 PM
Ooh la la...triple X! Wowie!
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/11/2019 12:30:00 PM
hahahahaha... Your mood is infectious... My hormones are dancing to an unknown appeal diffused by the aroma of your words.. Thank you so much for the comment
Date: 9/9/2019 5:32:00 PM
hmmm, a triple X here!!! It's burning up!
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/11/2019 12:28:00 PM
hahahaha.. Easy, easy, easy my wonderful friend.. I have ice close by. Thank you so much for the comment
Date: 9/9/2019 3:57:00 PM
wow what a passionate poem Funom:-) hugs Jan xx
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/11/2019 12:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Allison
Date: 9/9/2019 1:56:00 PM
This poem burned me Funom! Too hot for me to handle though I could feel your bliss. This poem needs a warning sign for the younger set! : )
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/11/2019 12:27:00 PM
wow! I am so glad to know... Your suggestion is duly noted.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2019 4:01:00 PM
got to agree Connie it is rather 'hot' for a young soup audience - perhaps it should have a warning in the title
Date: 9/9/2019 1:43:00 PM
Pressure broke the pipe...A love hymn indeed
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/11/2019 12:26:00 PM
hahahahahaha... Take it easy mate.. I am glad you like it.
Date: 9/9/2019 1:35:00 PM
- A really hot hymn, Funom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/11/2019 12:26:00 PM
Soooooooo much hugs to you Sunshine, its wonderful that you love it
Date: 9/9/2019 11:54:00 AM
A more than well done and explicit, erotic well penned work. Love, Panagiota
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/11/2019 12:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Panagiota
Date: 9/9/2019 11:46:00 AM
wow....very erotic feel to this one...nicely penned my friend :) hugs
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/11/2019 12:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Sandra
Date: 9/9/2019 10:52:00 AM
Very well executed Funom...enjoyed reading my friend...all the best...^WW^ :o)
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/11/2019 12:25:00 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend. I appreciate your encouragement
Date: 9/9/2019 10:52:00 AM
Bravo, Funom! Very sensual!
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/11/2019 12:25:00 PM
Thank you my brother from Italy.. I am thinking of visiting Italy soon, I hope you will host me
Date: 9/9/2019 10:31:00 AM
Oh wow! This is hot!;) what a lovely way to start my day!;)
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/9/2019 10:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Brenda

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