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Humpty Dumpty

Eggs Scrambled Fried on toast Sunny side up Shell

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2015 2:15:00 PM

I really like this. Once I did a limerick on old humpty dumpty!!

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/4/2015 2:20:00 PM

Hi, It was fun to write it really suited the form. I envy you all being able to write limerick's. I just cannot get the meter right. I wrote a string of 5 the other day and all just failed on the last line. thanks for dropping by Andrea. Love Shane xxx

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 1/10/2015 5:47:00 PM

Would be more than enough for all the king's horses and all the king's men, for sure. Especially since the horses would discreetly walk away. Nicely done, Shane! I'd like him poached, without the shell! I will read more of your treasures, Shane. So happy you are on the Soup! Mikki

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/10/2015 5:58:00 PM

Thank you mikki, I am trying to do the same with mr walrus hopefully have something for tomorrow Love Shanexxx

Jan Allison

Date: 1/6/2015 7:58:00 PM

Am in awe - never tried this form before Shane - you have nailed it!!!!! hugs jan xx Eggcellent lol its a 7 from me:-)

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/6/2015 11:01:00 PM

I checked the list twice for who’s been naughty or nice, your name’s in the red, time for you to go to bed. lots of Luv Shane xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/6/2015 9:15:00 PM

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hugs Jan xxxx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/6/2015 8:41:00 PM

2.40am here - why can't I get my body clock right! Mind in whirl I'm not a bad girl - will mail you about the symmetry:-) Hugs jan xx

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/6/2015 8:06:00 PM

Hi, 2.00AM and still going?? why can't i get the symmetry right? scrambled has slipped out of the frying pan! Lots of Luv Shane xxx