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Humanity Exists As Sad Creatures With Evil Skins

Humanity Exists As Sad Creatures With Evil Skins Reprieve may be a fine desert or a freedom to live A blessing freely granted or the power to freely give But we must dare admit what immense courage some things take And use our smart brains to identify the sorrowful fakes For humans react to threats in many kinds of strange ways But evil exists and demand opponents dearly pays War savagery that with pure delight evil men do Truth is one sorrowful day it may attack me and you This world to oft engages in darkness and destruction Mankind adopts wickedness as primary instructions We have no true safeguards when war its ugly head does raise Best if we trust our God, and give his Son our faithful praise. Humanity exists as sad creatures with evil skins. Full of selfish desires, greed in hearts of women and men. Robert J. Lindley, dark sonnet Jan. 21st, 1972 Note. This is the truth about humanity. Unless under Christ's banner, they too oft exist as evil creatures on the take, imho.

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Date: 9/20/2023 8:50:00 AM
Yes, yes... trust in the Lord... and his incredible Son... Well done. Ann
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/20/2023 2:04:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. Faith and Light are needed to destroy the evil darkness. God bless you..
Date: 9/20/2023 7:55:00 AM
You've expressed such harsh shades of humanity and cruelty here. Wars and bloodshed have never proven beneficial to anyone, all the sides suffer and moreover, we lose our biggest virtues, that our moral values. Sigh, so many deep and emotional lines here.. Your writes always unlock a vivid dimension of thinking for me and this one was too heartfelt to read. Brilliantly done!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/20/2023 2:02:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. Yes, war is a sad and tragic form of cruelty and barbarism. This is no positive attributes to such death and destruction. God bless you.
Date: 9/19/2023 9:03:00 AM
This would make a great foundational basis for an early Black Sabbath song, and considering the year you wrote it a possible influence? In any case, the war pigs are never sated, and neither is Sheol
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/20/2023 1:59:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. I am trying to catch up on my commenting. Black Sabbath, man I have not thought of hem in years! Great band! Vietnam War was a big influence on this poem... God bless you.
Date: 9/19/2023 8:38:00 AM
Even back to days of Adam and Eve, we read of wars and disasters. And it's all our fault for we ignore what God wants from us. Great sonnet.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/20/2023 1:56:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. Yes, ever since Eve took that bite humanity has attached itself to Satan and darkness, imho. God bless you.
Date: 9/19/2023 6:59:00 AM
To be under Christ’s banner is to be under the banner of hope, not wishful thinking but knowing that comes the worst we will walk into the forevermore of blessing and see Christ’s glorious face…what a day! God bless you, Robert! I do like that you write about the darkness for we cannot ignore that part of humanity.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/20/2023 1:55:00 PM
Thank you, my good friend. Yes, we poets must not shun away from the dark. As humanity itself is dark. We should warn in verse of that danger. God bless you.

Book: Shattered Sighs