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Hues To Blues

Its perfect here. I love it. Here...Peace and serenity fill and warm my heart. Out here...Its like Im someone else. Its so calm. Its a place where I can finally find myself. That was before. This is after. Here it was green and every hue you could imagine. Now...Its black and ash. You knew I loved it so you took it. You took it from me. I've lost it. I've lost myself. You took this cluster of nature from me. And with it you took a peice of me. With or without you, I'm stronger. Although its nothing, but black ash and smoke, I still love it here. I will come here and loose myself as I did before, Even though it is after.

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Chuck Novotny

Date: 3/17/2012 6:08:00 PM

You've chosen to call this Light Poetry, but I find it deeply moving. Congratulations. - Chuck

Cheyenne Kay
Date: 4/3/2012 3:58:00 PM

Thanks So much! I am looking forward to reading your petry as well. :D

Patrick Cornwall

Date: 3/13/2012 6:28:00 AM

<======thinks this lovely... Patrick

Cheyenne Kay
Date: 4/3/2012 3:59:00 PM

Thanks so much i appreciate that you have read my poetry and am looking forward toreading yours. ;P

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/12/2012 7:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Cheyenne. Love, Carol

Cheyenne Kay
Date: 4/3/2012 3:59:00 PM

Thanks so much am looking forward to beading more of your poerty Carol...Thanks again ;D

Bailey Kemp

Date: 6/20/2011 2:40:00 PM

this is an amazing poem i thought i would come and check out the poems you written i knew you were good but i didn't know you were this good

Dennis Bishop

Date: 6/17/2011 2:37:00 AM

wow this is amazing just truly amazing all your poems are chyernne

Cheyenne Kay
Date: 2/18/2012 9:50:00 PM

Thank you! IT means alot having other people read my poetry and like them. Thanks alot!

Cheyenne Kay
Date: 6/20/2011 5:49:00 AM

Thank you so much!Im amazed that people such as yourself is commenting on my poems...I never expected it at all...I am only a young...very young poet. Not a professional yet but some day I hope to be. All these sincere comments make me feel better about myself.Thank you so much!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/16/2011 1:26:00 PM

Very creative, deeply meaningful write, Cheyenne

Cheyenne Kay
Date: 6/20/2011 5:51:00 AM

Thank you! SOmeday I hope to have a book of my own and I think within a few years I will have a poetry books and you and all of the others who have commented on my work will be in the thanks! Because you guys are so nice and I negver expected this website to be so thoughtful and sincere!Thank you so very much!