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House Wrens Outside My Window

In the garden's quiet corner, Amidst the gentle rustle of leaves, House wrens diligently weave their nests, A labor of love in the springtime air. Each twig and blade of grass carefully chosen, Crafted with precision and purpose, To create a sanctuary, a haven, For new life to emerge and thrive. With each flutter of wings, A story unfolds, Of resilience, of hope, In the cycle of renewal. In this quiet symphony of nature, There is no need for rhyme or reason, Just the simple beauty, Of life finding its place, In the tapestry of existence.

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Date: 4/30/2024 4:20:00 PM
I did so enjoy your poem--I felt as if I was there with you witnessing the house wrens outside your window. Your words were captivating. Like you, I like the simple, symphonic realm of nature. Splendid job. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/30/2024 5:06:00 PM
Sara! Thank you! Nothing like an avionic symphony. To take flight in life! How beautiful thank you. Don
Date: 4/30/2024 11:13:00 AM
I just imagined they were outside my window. What a beautiful look at nature and it's blessings
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/30/2024 11:57:00 AM
Thank you, Karen. They are nested outside our window, Cheers, Don
Date: 4/30/2024 8:57:00 AM
Your poem beautifully captures the serene and harmonious essence of nature, particularly in the context of the garden where house wrens diligently build their nests. The imagery of the gentle rustle of leaves and the meticulous crafting of nests portrays a scene of tranquil activity, imbued with a sense of purpose and dedication.
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/30/2024 9:03:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comments. The nesting wrens are a true sign of spring! Cheers, Don
Date: 4/30/2024 2:14:00 AM
A beautiful poem and description. Well done.
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/30/2024 4:22:00 AM
Thank you, Jeanette. Have a good day. Don

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